There have been many inventions in human history, such as the wheel. Some people think the most important thing is the internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Inovations
Suggestion
Innovations
speed-up
the act of accelerating; increasing the speed
speedup
the human
life
in
deferent
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
ways. Though, we
could saw
Suggestion
could see
a lot of new findings, still some people believe that
internet
Suggestion
the internet
is the most vital among them. In my opinion, I agree to some
extant
the point or degree to which something extends
extent
with
above statement
Suggestion
the above statement
. Nowadays, we are living in a technological era which creates our
life
more easier
Suggestion
easier
and flexible.
Internet
Suggestion
The internet
is one of major factor which leads to
revelution
Suggestion
a revolution
revolution
revelations
revolutions
in our
life
in various aspects. It has effected on the social
life
, personal
life
, professional
life
.
For example
, currently, we are
abling
put into service; make work or employ for a particular purpose or for its inherent or natural purpose
applying
to our banking transactions without visiting to bank via the
internet
and
also
we can order our meals through apps. It is clear that
world wide web
Suggestion
the world wide web
is a most
powerfull
having great power or force or potency or effect
powerful
invention in the human history,
although
some parties are not willing to accept that. Some individuals are saying that
internet
Suggestion
the internet
ia
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
is
one of
newfinds
Suggestion
new finds
which enriched our culture and there are so many
inovetive
ahead of the times
innovative
inventive
products those can up-side down the
human's
Suggestion
human
history.
Bule
Suggestion
Bale
Boyle
Burl
can be taken as
a
Suggestion
an
example which is
also
turn
Suggestion
turning
the page in our
lifes
a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
. There are some counties which are not allowed to
uesed
Suggestion
use
used
internet
such
as North Korea.
However
, it is a country which is experimenting nuclear power. And
also
, China is not using even
Miscrosoft
Suggestion
Microsoft
web application, but China has
fast
Suggestion
the fastest
fastest
growing economy in the world. When considering above
fastors
anything that contributes causally to a result
factors
features
, how we can argue that the
internet
as a most
impotant
of great significance or value
important
invention?
People's culture
Suggestion
A people's culture
is
sharped
shaped to fit by or as if by altering the contours of a pliable mass (as by work or effort)
shaped
shopped
shared
more frequently by
deferent
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
type of fresh things and fresh ideas.
Internet
Suggestion
The internet
is one of new
findings which
Accept comma addition
findings, which
let
revelution
a drastic and far-reaching change in ways of thinking and behaving
revolution
in the human
life
. It
provide
Suggestion
provides
basement of new findings. Though, Some individuals
beleives
Suggestion
believe
believes
believed
that
world wide web
Suggestion
the world wide web
is
most powerful invention
Suggestion
the most powerful invention
.
Human brain
Suggestion
The human brain
A human brain
is more powerful than
those all new
Suggestion
all those new
findings
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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