Some people say that modern innovation brings about more problems than benefits? Do you agree or disagree?

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It can be argued that trendy technologies has caused tremendous harm than good. I strongly disagree with
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notion because technology has improved our way of communication and mode of transportation.
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of all, with the advent of technology, our way of communication,
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, sending if information has greatly improved.
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, instant messages
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as email, social media, has made sending of information a swift and almost immediately in response.
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, it can be argued that, innovations has caused more loss of jobs and has rendered some jobless but notwithstanding, the jobs it has created cannot be under emphasize and
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, there is no development without a sacrifice.
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, innovation has improved and made stress free our way of transportation,
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as, mode of moving from one place to the others.
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, air travelling from a distanced region like Sydney in Australia to New York in the United states of America have been made effective and a no stress one with the invention of aeroplane, jets and choppers.
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, it can be argued that, it has caused more loss of life,
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as, deaths from explosives,
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, lives that have been created and saved with it cannot be downplayed. In conclusion, trendy technologies have brought about more positive impacts
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as the improvement of our means of communication while
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influencing our mode of transportation. I will recommend that, the public is enlightened about the use of trendy technology and how it's affecting our lives positively
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