Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

There has been a growing number of people who opt not to eat
meat
or fish for health and environmental reasons. Classically, most of the people chose not to eat
meat
because they believe that it has detrimental effects on their health.
Moreover
,
this
trend has gained more attention
nowadays especially
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nowadays, especially
with the threat of global warming and awareness to animal rights. As a
meat
eater
myself I
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myself, I
believe that eating
meat
is necessary for human survival as long as it is eaten in moderation and grown in a sustainable environment. It has been proven by science that
meat
provides specific proteins that
can not
can not
cannot
be found in plants. And these proteins are necessary for human metabolism. People who opt not to eat
meat
may claim that they may feel good
initially
but in the long run they will feel weak because they lack the nutrients that their body needs. In an evolutionary standpoint, It is
also
believed that when early Humans shifted from eating plants to
meat
a meeting at which a number of athletic contests are held
meet
, their brain mass increased and researchers believed that
this
can be widely attributed from eating
meat
. Aside from the fact that
meat
gives us the essential nutrients that we need, it
also
tastes a lot better than plant-based foods and more people eat
meat
because of its palatability especially when it’s cooked properly.
Nevertheless
, more people are joining “
veganism
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Veganism
” because most of them feel that want to contribute something to the environment, I admire them for
being personally committed
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been personally committed
to
this
cause and I think that
this
movement requires
lot
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a lot
of sacrifices especially for people who are used to eating
meat
. To conclude, I think
meat
is still the best option for human
survival especially
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survival, especially
nowadays that its production is
at
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on
an industrial scale so
meat
is cheaply available anywhere and the options for non-
meat
eaters are becoming scarce even though their numbers are
also
increasing.
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