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them will make them feel looted and discriminated which will discourage them from visiting our

country

again. To generate extra

income

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ticket

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tourist

attraction

with some special services so that those tourists who want to make

use

of these special facilities could buy

this

ticket

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way

revenue

could be generated without making foreign tourists feel biased. To exemplify,

Vaishno

Devi

shrine

in India has a VIP ticketing

system

, with

this

ticket

tourist

can fly to the

Vaishno

Devi

Valley by

helicopter

and can pay their

visit

inside the

temple

through a separate

door

, avoiding the long

queue

. In

conclusion

, I would reiterate that en cashing higher charges from the foreign

tourist

will be detrimental as it will discourage them from visiting again,

however

a special

ticket

system

will generate more

revenue

without being discriminatory.It is argued that an extra

charge

should be levied over the foreign tourists who

visit

places of

tourist

attractions in a

country

. I completely disagree with

this

view

. In my

opinion

, it would be detrimental,

therefore

, in

this

essay

, I shall ponder over my

argument

and

also

suggest some alternate options to generate more

revenue

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with,

one

of the

reason

there should not be extra charges for the foreign

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foreign

currency

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currency

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market

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, a

number

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transportation

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from these foreign tourists only. Charging

extra

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country

again. To generate extra

income

, a VIP

ticket

should be introduced at the places of

tourist

attraction

with some special services so that those tourists who want to make

use

of these special facilities could buy

this

ticket

This

way

revenue

could be generated without making foreign tourists feel biased. To exemplify,

Vaishno

Devi

shrine

in India has a VIP ticketing

system

, with

this

ticket

tourist

can fly to the

Vaishno

Devi

Valley by

helicopter

and can pay their

visit

inside the

temple

through a separate

door

, avoiding the long

queue

. In

conclusion

, I would reiterate that en cashing higher charges from the foreign

tourist

will be detrimental as it will discourage them from visiting again,

however

a special

ticket

system

will generate more

revenue

without being discriminatory.It is argued that an extra

charge

should be levied over the foreign tourists who

visit

places of

tourist

attractions in a

country

. I completely disagree with

this

view

. In my

opinion

, it would be detrimental,

therefore

, in

this

essay

, I shall ponder over my

argument

and

also

suggest some alternate options to generate more

revenue

To begin

with,

one

of the

reason

there should not be extra charges for the foreign

tourist

is it will put negative

impact

in the

mind

of these foreign tourists. Tourism plays a major

role

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extra

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an extra price

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from

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for

them will make them feel looted and discriminated which will discourage them from visiting our

country

again. To generate extra

income

, a VIP

ticket

should be introduced at the places of

tourist

attraction

with some special services so that those tourists who want to make

use

of these special facilities could buy

this

ticket

This

way

revenue

could be generated without making foreign tourists feel biased. To exemplify,

Vaishno

Devi

shrine

in India has a VIP ticketing

system

, with

this

ticket

tourist

can fly to the

Vaishno

Devi

Valley by

helicopter

and can pay their

visit

inside the

temple

through a separate

door

, avoiding the long

queue

. In

conclusion

, I would reiterate that en cashing higher charges from the foreign

tourist

will be detrimental as it will discourage them from visiting again,

however

a special

ticket

system

will generate more

revenue

without being discriminatory.It is argued that an extra

charge

should be levied over the foreign tourists who

visit

places of

tourist

attractions in a

country

. I completely disagree with

this

view

. In my

opinion

, it would be detrimental,

therefore

, in

this

essay

, I shall ponder over my

argument

and

also

suggest some alternate options to generate more

revenue

To begin

with,

one

of the

reason

there should not be extra charges for the foreign

tourist

is it will put negative

impact

in the

mind

of these foreign tourists. Tourism plays a major

role

country's

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the country's economy

a country's economy

economy

. Due to these foreign

tourist

foreign

currency

comes into our

country

and the

nations

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nation's

currency

grows stronger in the international

market

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, a

number

of businesses

such

as hotels,

restaurant

transportation

services run through

income

from these foreign tourists only. Charging

extra

Suggestion

an extra price

price

from

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for

them will make them feel looted and discriminated which will discourage them from visiting our

country

again. To generate extra

income

, a VIP

ticket

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with some special services so that those tourists who want to make

use

of these special facilities could buy

this

ticket

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way

revenue

could be generated without making foreign tourists feel biased. To exemplify,

Vaishno

Devi

shrine

in India has a VIP ticketing

system

, with

this

ticket

tourist

can fly to the

Vaishno

Devi

Valley by

helicopter

and can pay their

visit

inside the

temple

through a separate

door

, avoiding the long

queue

. In

conclusion

, I would reiterate that en cashing higher charges from the foreign

tourist

will be detrimental as it will discourage them from visiting again,

however

a special

ticket

system

will generate more

revenue

without being discriminatory.It is argued that an extra

charge

should be levied over the foreign tourists who

visit

places of

tourist

attractions in a

country

. I completely disagree with

this

view

. In my

opinion

, it would be detrimental,

therefore

, in

this

essay

, I shall ponder over my

argument

and

also

suggest some alternate options to generate more

revenue

To begin

with,

one

of the

reason

there should not be extra charges for the foreign

tourist

is it will put negative

impact

in the

mind

of these foreign tourists. Tourism plays a major

role

country's

Suggestion

the country's economy

a country's economy

economy

. Due to these foreign

tourist

foreign

currency

comes into our

country

and the

nations

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nation's

currency

grows stronger in the international

market

Moreover

, a

number

of businesses

such

as hotels,

restaurant

transportation

services run through

income

from these foreign tourists only. Charging

extra

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an extra price

price

from

Suggestion

for

them will make them feel looted and discriminated which will discourage them from visiting our

country

again. To generate extra

income

, a VIP

ticket

should be introduced at the places of

tourist

attraction

with some special services so that those tourists who want to make

use

of these special facilities could buy

this

ticket

This

way

revenue

could be generated without making foreign tourists feel biased. To exemplify,

Vaishno

Devi

shrine

in India has a VIP ticketing

system

, with

this

ticket

touristt

someone who travels for pleasure

tourists

tourist t

can fly to the

Vaishno

Devi

Valley by

helicopter

and can pay their

visit

inside the

temple

through a separate

door

, avoiding the long

queue

. In

conclusion

, I would reiterate that en cashing higher charges from the foreign

tourist

will be detrimental as it will discourage them from visiting again,

however

a special

ticket

system

will generate more

revenue

without being discriminatory.It is argued that an extra

charge

should be levied over the foreign tourists who

visit

places of

tourist

attractions in a

country

. I completely disagree with

this

view

. In my

opinion

, it would be detrimental,

therefore

, in

this

essay

, I shall ponder over my

argument

and

also

suggest some alternate options to generate more

revenue

To begin

with,

one

of the

reason

there should not be extra charges for the foreign

tourist

is it will put negative

impact

in the

mind

of these foreign tourists. Tourism plays a major

role

country's

Suggestion

the country's economy

a country's economy

economy

. Due to these foreign

tourist

foreign

currency

comes into our

country

and the

nations

Suggestion

nation's

currency

grows stronger in the international

market

Moreover

, a

number

of businesses

such

as hotels,

restaurant

transportation

services run through

income

from these foreign tourists only. Charging

extra

Suggestion

an extra price

price

from

Suggestion

for

them will make them feel looted and discriminated which will discourage them from visiting our

country

again. To generate extra

income

, a VIP

ticket

should be introduced at the places of

tourist

attraction

with some special services so that those tourists who want to make

use

of these special facilities could buy

this

ticket

This

way

revenue

could be generated without making foreign tourists feel biased. To exemplify,

Vaishno

Devi

shrine

in India has a VIP ticketing

system

, with

this

ticket

tourist

can fly to the

Vaishno

Devi

Valley by

helicopter

and can pay their

visit

inside the

temple

through a separate

door

, avoiding the long

queue

. In

conclusion

, I would reiterate that en cashing higher charges from the foreign

touristt

someone who travels for pleasure

tourists

tourist t

will be detrimental as it will discourage them from visiting again,

however

a special

ticket

system

will generate more

revenue

without being discriminatory.It is argued that an extra

charge

should be levied over the foreign tourists who

visit

places of

tourist

attractions in a

countryy

a politically organized body of people under a single government

country

. I completely disagree with

this

view

. In my

opinion

, it would be detrimental,

therefore

, in

this

essay

, I shall ponder over my

argument

and

also

suggest some alternate options to generate more

revenue

To begin

with,

one

of the

reason

there should not be extra charges for the foreign

tourist

is it will put negative

impact

in the

mind

of these foreign tourists. Tourism plays a major

role

country's

Suggestion

the country's economy

a country's economy

economy

. Due to these foreign

tourist

foreign

currency

comes into our

country

and the

nations

Suggestion

nation's

currency

grows stronger in the international

market

Moreover

, a

number

of businesses

such

as hotels,

restaurant

transportation

services run through

income

from these foreign tourists only. Charging

extra

Suggestion

an extra price

price

from

Suggestion

for

them will make them feel looted and discriminated which will discourage them from visiting our

country

again. To generate extra

income

, a VIP

ticket

should be introduced at the places of

tourist

attraction

with some special services so that those tourists who want to make

use

of these special facilities could buy

this

ticket

This

way

revenue

could be generated without making foreign tourists feel biased. To exemplify,

Vaishno

Devi

shrine

in India has a VIP ticketing

system

, with

this

ticket

tourist

can fly to the

Vaishno

Devi

Valley by

helicopter

and can pay their

visit

inside the

temple

through a separate

door

, avoiding the long

queue

. In

conclusion

, I would reiterate that en cashing higher charges from the foreign

tourist

will be detrimental as it will discourage them from visiting again,

however

a special

ticket

system

will generate more

revenue

without being discriminatory.It is argued that an extra

charge

should be levied over the foreign tourists who

visit

places of

tourist

attractions in a

country

. I completely disagree with

this

view

. In my

opinion

, it would be detrimental,

therefore

, in

this

essay

, I shall ponder over my

argument

and

also

suggest some alternate options to generate more

revenue

To begin

with,

one

of the

reason

there should not be extra charges for the foreign

tourist

is it will put negative

impact

in the

mind

of these foreign tourists. Tourism plays a major

role

countryy's

Suggestion

the country's economy

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economy

. Due to these foreign

tourist

foreign

currency

comes into our

country

and the

nations

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nation's

currency

grows stronger in the international

market

Moreover

, a

number

of businesses

such

as hotels,

restaurant

transportation

services run through

income

from these foreign tourists only. Charging

extra

Suggestion

an extra price

price

from

Suggestion

for

them will make them feel looted and discriminated which will discourage them from visiting our

country

again. To generate extra

income

, a VIP

ticket

should be introduced at the places of

tourist

attraction

with some special services so that those tourists who want to make

use

of these special facilities could buy

this

ticket

This

way

revenue

could be generated without making foreign tourists feel biased. To exemplify,

Vaishno

Devi

shrine

in India has a VIP ticketing

system

, with

this

ticket

tourist

can fly to the

Vaishno

Devi

Valley by

helicopter

and can pay their

visit

inside the

temple

through a separate

door

, avoiding the long

queue

. In

conclusion

, I would reiterate that en cashing higher charges from the foreign

tourist

will be detrimental as it will discourage them from visiting again,

however

a special

ticket

system

will generate more

revenue

without being discriminatory.It is argued that an extra

charge

should be levied over the foreign tourists who

visit

places of

tourist

attractions in a

country

. I completely disagree with

this

view

. In my

opinion

, it would be detrimental,

therefore

, in

this

essay

, I shall ponder over my

argument

and

also

suggest some alternate options to generate more

revenue

To begin

with,

one

of the

reason

there should not be extra charges for the foreign

tourist

is it will put negative

impact

in the

mind

of these foreign tourists. Tourism plays a major

role

country's

Suggestion

the country's economy

a country's economy

economy

. Due to these foreign

tourist

foreign

currency

comes into our

countryy

a politically organized body of people under a single government

country

and the

nations

Suggestion

nation's

currency

grows stronger in the international

market

Moreover

, a

number

of businesses

such

as hotels,

restaurant

transportation

services run through

income

from these foreign tourists only. Charging

extra

Suggestion

an extra price

price

from

Suggestion

for

them will make them feel looted and discriminated which will discourage them from visiting our

country

again. To generate extra

income

, a VIP

ticket

should be introduced at the places of

tourist

attraction

with some special services so that those tourists who want to make

use

of these special facilities could buy

this

ticket

This

way

revenue

could be generated without making foreign tourists feel biased. To exemplify,

Vaishno

Devi

shrine

in India has a VIP ticketing

system

, with

this

ticket

tourist

can fly to the

Vaishno

Devi

Valley by

helicopter

and can pay their

visit

inside the

temple

through a separate

door

, avoiding the long

queue

. In

conclusion

, I would reiterate that en cashing higher charges from the foreign

tourist

will be detrimental as it will discourage them from visiting again,

however

a special

ticket

system

will generate more

revenue

without being discriminatory.It is argued that an extra

charge

should be levied over the foreign tourists who

visit

places of

tourist

attractions in a

country

. I completely disagree with

this

view

. In my

opinion

, it would be detrimental,

therefore

, in

this

essay

, I shall ponder over my

argument

and

also

suggest some alternate options to generate more

revenue

To begin

with,

one

of the

reason

there should not be extra charges for the foreign

tourist

is it will put negative

impact

in the

mind

of these foreign tourists. Tourism plays a major

role

country's

Suggestion

the country's economy

a country's economy

economy

. Due to these foreign

tourist

foreign

currency

comes into our

country

and the

nations

Suggestion

nation's

currency

grows stronger in the international

market

Moreover

, a

number

of businesses

such

as hotels,

restaurant

transportation

services run through

income

from these foreign tourists only. Charging

extra

Suggestion

an extra price

price

from

Suggestion

for

them will make them feel looted and discriminated which will discourage them from visiting our

countryy

a politically organized body of people under a single government

country

county

again. To generate extra

income

, a VIP

ticket

should be introduced at the places of

tourist

attraction

with some special services so that those tourists who want to make

use

of these special facilities could buy

this

ticket

This

way

revenue

could be generated without making foreign tourists feel biased. To exemplify,

Vaishno

Devi

shrine

in India has a VIP ticketing

system

, with

this

ticket

tourist

can fly to the

Vaishno

Devi

Valley by

helicopter

and can pay their

visit

inside the

temple

through a separate

door

, avoiding the long

queue

. In

conclusion

, I would reiterate that en cashing higher charges from the foreign

tourist

will be detrimental as it will discourage them from visiting again,

however

a special

ticket

system

will generate more

revenue

without being discriminatory.

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