Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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attractions in a
country
. I completely disagree with
this
view
. In my
opinion
, it would be detrimental,
therefore
, in
this
essay
, I shall ponder over my
argument
and
also
suggest some alternate options to generate more
revenue
.
To begin
with,
one
of the
reason
there should not be extra charges for the foreign
tourist
is it will put negative
impact
in the
mind
of these foreign tourists. Tourism plays a major
role
in
country's
Suggestion
the country's economy
a country's economy
economy
. Due to these foreign
tourist
foreign
currency
comes into our
country
and the
nations
Suggestion
nation's
currency
grows stronger in the international
market
.
Moreover
, a
number
of businesses
such
as hotels,
restaurant
,
transportation
services run through
income
from these foreign tourists only. Charging
extra
Suggestion
an extra price
price
from
Suggestion
for
them will make them feel looted and discriminated which will discourage them from visiting our
country
again. To generate extra
income
, a VIP
ticket
should be introduced at the places of
tourist
attraction
with some special services so that those tourists who want to make
use
of these special facilities could buy
this
ticket
.
This
way
more
revenue
could be generated without making foreign tourists feel biased. To exemplify,
Vaishno
Devi
shrine
in India has a VIP ticketing
system
, with
this
ticket
tourist
can fly to the
Vaishno
Devi
Valley by
helicopter
and can pay their
visit
inside the
temple
through a separate
door
, avoiding the long
queue
. In
conclusion
, I would reiterate that en cashing higher charges from the foreign
tourist
will be detrimental as it will discourage them from visiting again,
however
a special
ticket
system
will generate more
revenue
without being discriminatory.It is argued that an extra
charge
should be levied over the foreign tourists who
visit
places of
tourist
attractions in a
country
. I completely disagree with
this
view
. In my
opinion
, it would be detrimental,
therefore
, in
this
essay
, I shall ponder over my
argument
and
also
suggest some alternate options to generate more
revenue
.
To begin
with,
one
of the
reason
there should not be extra charges for the foreign
touristt
someone who travels for pleasure
tourist
tourist t
tourists
is it will put negative
impact
in the
mind
of these foreign tourists. Tourism plays a major
role
in
country's
Suggestion
the country's economy
a country's economy
economy
. Due to these foreign
tourist
foreign
currency
comes into our
country
and the
nations
Suggestion
nation's
currency
grows stronger in the international
market
.
Moreover
, a
number
of businesses
such
as hotels,
restaurant
,
transportation
services run through
income
from these foreign tourists only. Charging
extra
Suggestion
an extra price
price
from
Suggestion
for
them will make them feel looted and discriminated which will discourage them from visiting our
country
again. To generate extra
income
, a VIP
ticket
should be introduced at the places of
tourist
attraction
with some special services so that those tourists who want to make
use
of these special facilities could buy
this
ticket
.
This
way
more
revenue
could be generated without making foreign tourists feel biased. To exemplify,
Vaishno
Devi
shrine
in India has a VIP ticketing
system
, with
this
ticket
tourist
can fly to the
Vaishno
Devi
Valley by
helicopter
and can pay their
visit
inside the
temple
through a separate
door
, avoiding the long
queue
. In
conclusion
, I would reiterate that en cashing higher charges from the foreign
tourist
will be detrimental as it will discourage them from visiting again,
however
a special
ticket
system
will generate more
revenue
without being discriminatory.It is argued that an extra
charge
should be levied over the foreign tourists who
visit
places of
tourist
attractions in a
country
. I completely disagree with
this
view
. In my
opinion
, it would be detrimental,
therefore
, in
this
essay
, I shall ponder over my
argument
and
also
suggest some alternate options to generate more
revenue
.
To begin
with,
one
of the
reason
there should not be extra charges for the foreign
tourist
is it will put negative
impact
in the
mind
of these foreign tourists. Tourism plays a major
role
in
country's
Suggestion
the country's economy
a country's economy
economy
. Due to these foreign
touristt foreign
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tourists foreign
tourist t foreign
tourist foreign
currency
comes into our
country
and the
nations
Suggestion
nation's
currency
grows stronger in the international
market
.
Moreover
, a
number
of businesses
such
as hotels,
restaurant
,
transportation
services run through
income
from these foreign tourists only. Charging
extra
Suggestion
an extra price
price
from
Suggestion
for
them will make them feel looted and discriminated which will discourage them from visiting our
country
again. To generate extra
income
, a VIP
ticket
should be introduced at the places of
tourist
attraction
with some special services so that those tourists who want to make
use
of these special facilities could buy
this
ticket
.
This
way
more
revenue
could be generated without making foreign tourists feel biased. To exemplify,
Vaishno
Devi
shrine
in India has a VIP ticketing
system
, with
this
ticket
tourist
can fly to the
Vaishno
Devi
Valley by
helicopter
and can pay their
visit
inside the
temple
through a separate
door
, avoiding the long
queue
. In
conclusion
, I would reiterate that en cashing higher charges from the foreign
tourist
will be detrimental as it will discourage them from visiting again,
however
a special
ticket
system
will generate more
revenue
without being discriminatory.It is argued that an extra
charge
should be levied over the foreign tourists who
visit
places of
tourist
attractions in a
country
. I completely disagree with
this
view
. In my
opinion
, it would be detrimental,
therefore
, in
this
essay
, I shall ponder over my
argument
and
also
suggest some alternate options to generate more
revenue
.
To begin
with,
one
of the
reason
there should not be extra charges for the foreign
tourist
is it will put negative
impact
in the
mind
of these foreign tourists. Tourism plays a major
role
in
country's
Suggestion
the country's economy
a country's economy
economy
. Due to these foreign
tourist
foreign
currency
comes into our
country
and the
nations
Suggestion
nation's
currency
grows stronger in the international
market
.
Moreover
, a
number
of businesses
such
as hotels,
restaurant
,
transportation
services run through
income
from these foreign tourists only. Charging
extra
Suggestion
an extra price
price
from
Suggestion
for
them will make them feel looted and discriminated which will discourage them from visiting our
country
again. To generate extra
income
, a VIP
ticket
should be introduced at the places of
touristt
someone who travels for pleasure
tourist
tourist t
attraction
with some special services so that those tourists who want to make
use
of these special facilities could buy
this
ticket
.
This
way
more
revenue
could be generated without making foreign tourists feel biased. To exemplify,
Vaishno
Devi
shrine
in India has a VIP ticketing
system
, with
this
ticket
tourist
can fly to the
Vaishno
Devi
Valley by
helicopter
and can pay their
visit
inside the
temple
through a separate
door
, avoiding the long
queue
. In
conclusion
, I would reiterate that en cashing higher charges from the foreign
tourist
will be detrimental as it will discourage them from visiting again,
however
a special
ticket
system
will generate more
revenue
without being discriminatory.It is argued that an extra
charge
should be levied over the foreign tourists who
visit
places of
tourist
attractions in a
country
. I completely disagree with
this
view
. In my
opinion
, it would be detrimental,
therefore
, in
this
essay
, I shall ponder over my
argument
and
also
suggest some alternate options to generate more
revenue
.
To begin
with,
one
of the
reason
there should not be extra charges for the foreign
tourist
is it will put negative
impact
in the
mind
of these foreign tourists. Tourism plays a major
role
in
country's
Suggestion
the country's economy
a country's economy
economy
. Due to these foreign
tourist
foreign
currency
comes into our
country
and the
nations
Suggestion
nation's
currency
grows stronger in the international
market
.
Moreover
, a
number
of businesses
such
as hotels,
restaurant
,
transportation
services run through
income
from these foreign tourists only. Charging
extra
Suggestion
an extra price
price
from
Suggestion
for
them will make them feel looted and discriminated which will discourage them from visiting our
country
again. To generate extra
income
, a VIP
ticket
should be introduced at the places of
tourist
attraction
with some special services so that those tourists who want to make
use
of these special facilities could buy
this
ticket
.
This
way
more
revenue
could be generated without making foreign tourists feel biased. To exemplify,
Vaishno
Devi
shrine
in India has a VIP ticketing
system
, with
this
ticket
touristt
someone who travels for pleasure
tourists
tourist t
can fly to the
Vaishno
Devi
Valley by
helicopter
and can pay their
visit
inside the
temple
through a separate
door
, avoiding the long
queue
. In
conclusion
, I would reiterate that en cashing higher charges from the foreign
tourist
will be detrimental as it will discourage them from visiting again,
however
a special
ticket
system
will generate more
revenue
without being discriminatory.It is argued that an extra
charge
should be levied over the foreign tourists who
visit
places of
tourist
attractions in a
country
. I completely disagree with
this
view
. In my
opinion
, it would be detrimental,
therefore
, in
this
essay
, I shall ponder over my
argument
and
also
suggest some alternate options to generate more
revenue
.
To begin
with,
one
of the
reason
there should not be extra charges for the foreign
tourist
is it will put negative
impact
in the
mind
of these foreign tourists. Tourism plays a major
role
in
country's
Suggestion
the country's economy
a country's economy
economy
. Due to these foreign
tourist
foreign
currency
comes into our
country
and the
nations
Suggestion
nation's
currency
grows stronger in the international
market
.
Moreover
, a
number
of businesses
such
as hotels,
restaurant
,
transportation
services run through
income
from these foreign tourists only. Charging
extra
Suggestion
an extra price
price
from
Suggestion
for
them will make them feel looted and discriminated which will discourage them from visiting our
country
again. To generate extra
income
, a VIP
ticket
should be introduced at the places of
tourist
attraction
with some special services so that those tourists who want to make
use
of these special facilities could buy
this
ticket
.
This
way
more
revenue
could be generated without making foreign tourists feel biased. To exemplify,
Vaishno
Devi
shrine
in India has a VIP ticketing
system
, with
this
ticket
tourist
can fly to the
Vaishno
Devi
Valley by
helicopter
and can pay their
visit
inside the
temple
through a separate
door
, avoiding the long
queue
. In
conclusion
, I would reiterate that en cashing higher charges from the foreign
touristt
someone who travels for pleasure
tourists
tourist t
will be detrimental as it will discourage them from visiting again,
however
a special
ticket
system
will generate more
revenue
without being discriminatory.It is argued that an extra
charge
should be levied over the foreign tourists who
visit
places of
tourist
attractions in a
countryy
a politically organized body of people under a single government
country
. I completely disagree with
this
view
. In my
opinion
, it would be detrimental,
therefore
, in
this
essay
, I shall ponder over my
argument
and
also
suggest some alternate options to generate more
revenue
.
To begin
with,
one
of the
reason
there should not be extra charges for the foreign
tourist
is it will put negative
impact
in the
mind
of these foreign tourists. Tourism plays a major
role
in
country's
Suggestion
the country's economy
a country's economy
economy
. Due to these foreign
tourist
foreign
currency
comes into our
country
and the
nations
Suggestion
nation's
currency
grows stronger in the international
market
.
Moreover
, a
number
of businesses
such
as hotels,
restaurant
,
transportation
services run through
income
from these foreign tourists only. Charging
extra
Suggestion
an extra price
price
from
Suggestion
for
them will make them feel looted and discriminated which will discourage them from visiting our
country
again. To generate extra
income
, a VIP
ticket
should be introduced at the places of
tourist
attraction
with some special services so that those tourists who want to make
use
of these special facilities could buy
this
ticket
.
This
way
more
revenue
could be generated without making foreign tourists feel biased. To exemplify,
Vaishno
Devi
shrine
in India has a VIP ticketing
system
, with
this
ticket
tourist
can fly to the
Vaishno
Devi
Valley by
helicopter
and can pay their
visit
inside the
temple
through a separate
door
, avoiding the long
queue
. In
conclusion
, I would reiterate that en cashing higher charges from the foreign
tourist
will be detrimental as it will discourage them from visiting again,
however
a special
ticket
system
will generate more
revenue
without being discriminatory.It is argued that an extra
charge
should be levied over the foreign tourists who
visit
places of
tourist
attractions in a
country
. I completely disagree with
this
view
. In my
opinion
, it would be detrimental,
therefore
, in
this
essay
, I shall ponder over my
argument
and
also
suggest some alternate options to generate more
revenue
.
To begin
with,
one
of the
reason
there should not be extra charges for the foreign
tourist
is it will put negative
impact
in the
mind
of these foreign tourists. Tourism plays a major
role
in
countryy's
Suggestion
the country's economy
country's economy
a country's economy
countries economy
economy
. Due to these foreign
tourist
foreign
currency
comes into our
country
and the
nations
Suggestion
nation's
currency
grows stronger in the international
market
.
Moreover
, a
number
of businesses
such
as hotels,
restaurant
,
transportation
services run through
income
from these foreign tourists only. Charging
extra
Suggestion
an extra price
price
from
Suggestion
for
them will make them feel looted and discriminated which will discourage them from visiting our
country
again. To generate extra
income
, a VIP
ticket
should be introduced at the places of
tourist
attraction
with some special services so that those tourists who want to make
use
of these special facilities could buy
this
ticket
.
This
way
more
revenue
could be generated without making foreign tourists feel biased. To exemplify,
Vaishno
Devi
shrine
in India has a VIP ticketing
system
, with
this
ticket
tourist
can fly to the
Vaishno
Devi
Valley by
helicopter
and can pay their
visit
inside the
temple
through a separate
door
, avoiding the long
queue
. In
conclusion
, I would reiterate that en cashing higher charges from the foreign
tourist
will be detrimental as it will discourage them from visiting again,
however
a special
ticket
system
will generate more
revenue
without being discriminatory.It is argued that an extra
charge
should be levied over the foreign tourists who
visit
places of
tourist
attractions in a
country
. I completely disagree with
this
view
. In my
opinion
, it would be detrimental,
therefore
, in
this
essay
, I shall ponder over my
argument
and
also
suggest some alternate options to generate more
revenue
.
To begin
with,
one
of the
reason
there should not be extra charges for the foreign
tourist
is it will put negative
impact
in the
mind
of these foreign tourists. Tourism plays a major
role
in
country's
Suggestion
the country's economy
a country's economy
economy
. Due to these foreign
tourist
foreign
currency
comes into our
countryy
a politically organized body of people under a single government
country
and the
nations
Suggestion
nation's
currency
grows stronger in the international
market
.
Moreover
, a
number
of businesses
such
as hotels,
restaurant
,
transportation
services run through
income
from these foreign tourists only. Charging
extra
Suggestion
an extra price
price
from
Suggestion
for
them will make them feel looted and discriminated which will discourage them from visiting our
country
again. To generate extra
income
, a VIP
ticket
should be introduced at the places of
tourist
attraction
with some special services so that those tourists who want to make
use
of these special facilities could buy
this
ticket
.
This
way
more
revenue
could be generated without making foreign tourists feel biased. To exemplify,
Vaishno
Devi
shrine
in India has a VIP ticketing
system
, with
this
ticket
tourist
can fly to the
Vaishno
Devi
Valley by
helicopter
and can pay their
visit
inside the
temple
through a separate
door
, avoiding the long
queue
. In
conclusion
, I would reiterate that en cashing higher charges from the foreign
tourist
will be detrimental as it will discourage them from visiting again,
however
a special
ticket
system
will generate more
revenue
without being discriminatory.It is argued that an extra
charge
should be levied over the foreign tourists who
visit
places of
tourist
attractions in a
country
. I completely disagree with
this
view
. In my
opinion
, it would be detrimental,
therefore
, in
this
essay
, I shall ponder over my
argument
and
also
suggest some alternate options to generate more
revenue
.
To begin
with,
one
of the
reason
there should not be extra charges for the foreign
tourist
is it will put negative
impact
in the
mind
of these foreign tourists. Tourism plays a major
role
in
country's
Suggestion
the country's economy
a country's economy
economy
. Due to these foreign
tourist
foreign
currency
comes into our
country
and the
nations
Suggestion
nation's
currency
grows stronger in the international
market
.
Moreover
, a
number
of businesses
such
as hotels,
restaurant
,
transportation
services run through
income
from these foreign tourists only. Charging
extra
Suggestion
an extra price
price
from
Suggestion
for
them will make them feel looted and discriminated which will discourage them from visiting our
countryy
a politically organized body of people under a single government
country
county
again. To generate extra
income
, a VIP
ticket
should be introduced at the places of
tourist
attraction
with some special services so that those tourists who want to make
use
of these special facilities could buy
this
ticket
.
This
way
more
revenue
could be generated without making foreign tourists feel biased. To exemplify,
Vaishno
Devi
shrine
in India has a VIP ticketing
system
, with
this
ticket
tourist
can fly to the
Vaishno
Devi
Valley by
helicopter
and can pay their
visit
inside the
temple
through a separate
door
, avoiding the long
queue
. In
conclusion
, I would reiterate that en cashing higher charges from the foreign
tourist
will be detrimental as it will discourage them from visiting again,
however
a special
ticket
system
will generate more
revenue
without being discriminatory.

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