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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?

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Nowadays, It is good for younger to achieve everything in their
life
 without any stress. But many individual feel that giving permission to their children is not good for them because they think it is only their own choices for their wards. But some people think that freedom is
mandotary
required by rule
mandatory
 for their kids. So, I will discuss my
view points
a mental position from which things are viewed
viewpoints
 in
upcoming paragraphs
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the upcoming paragraphs
.
First
 and foremost, most people believe that their wards totally depend upon their parents because their
care-taker
a custodian who is hired to take care of something (property or a person)
caretaker
caretakers
 provide facilities
to
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for
them whereas
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them, whereas
 individuals feel that children are their responsibilities and they want to choose everything for their kids
such
 as if their wards want any necessity thing for their wishes
then
 parents think that these matters like choosing food, clothes as well as entertainment
thingsfor
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things for
 them. So, these
matter
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matters
 is not good for their children.
On the other hand
, other people believe that it is prominent for
youngersters
a young person of either sex
youngsters
 to make
ttheir
of them or themselves
their
there
 own decisions related to basic needs. When wards take their own decision for their necessity
parts
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parts, then
then
 it provide them to stronger and built their
confidents
freedom from doubt; belief in yourself and your abilities
confidence
confidants
 more which they want for their successful
life
.
Moreover
, those kids are independent in their
life
. They become more responsible as well as successful. So, it is a part of their
life
 to achieve their goal of
life
.
For instance
, in foreign era, people totally provide freedom
to
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for
 their young children those are above 18 years and these have power to
takke
carry out
take
decision
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decisions
a decision
the decision
 in their personal
life
. In the nutshell,
individual
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the individual
provide
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provides
 freedom to their children because it is
crucial part
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a crucial part
for
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of
in
 the growth of their children. It should be
compulsary
required by rule
compulsory
for wards
at or to or toward the front
forwards
 to become them more responsible as well as stronger.

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