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Why do you think social skills are now being emphasized by companies during the recruitment process? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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In
this
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 day and age, job opportunities are more competitive than ever before since recruitment on the rise and rival candidates.
Hence
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, contiguous to qualifications, which normally use to evaluate level of candidates, social skills become another significant criterion for employers to select appropriate employees and the below essay will demonstrate and illustrate for the necessity of social skills in
career
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the career
a career
 of
ones
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one s
.
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,
ones
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the ones
 having social skills is truly deft communication with
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
. There is no doubt that rapid development of globalization
bring
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brings
 about cooperation among local departments with multinational corporations.
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, in order to get efficacious business relationships, departments ought to recruit employees have subtle mind and negotiation skill whom can increase not only successful ability but
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 solidarity in every trade relations. What is more, after
completed
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completing
 a few commercial
affairs local
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affairs, local
 companies can gradually advance and extend their position in the map of the world. Another unquestionable reason is social skills take time more than any qualifications.
Althought
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Although
, a normal person can easily learn a subject in a short time, social skills need a
longer
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long
lengthy
 process so as to comprehend it.
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, between two candidates have
distintion
a discrimination between things as different and distinct
distinction
degree
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degree, however
however
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, one of them lack of teamwork skills. So that, the employers will choose who the other candidate
cause
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causes
 teamwork skills super important in
work enviroment
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the work environment
work environment
a work environment
work environments
. In a nutshell, social skills not only support ones in their recruitment process but
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 in their daily life.
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, it not mean ones just focus on social skills and forget basic knowledge, we should balance both of them.
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