In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

In some countries young people are encouraged to

work

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or

travel

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for a

year

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between finishing

school

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and starting

university

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studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decided to do it. In many coun

tries some stu

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countries, some

dents take a

year

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off after finishing their high

school

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studies for travelling or working before they enro

ll in

register formally as a participant or member

enrol

enrolled

a

university

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. In my perspective,

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one

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year

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gap in between high

school

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and

university

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provides them more disadvantages than advantages. On the

one

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hand, there are some merits for students who take a

year

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off to

travel

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or

work

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between high

school

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and

university

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.

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,

travel

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broadens the mind of your people. 

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might help them to gain valuable experience in their life.

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, students who

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to different places get a chance to mingle with different types of people and cultures and

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may improve their knowledge and experience. Another positive outcome is that while trav

eling or

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

working, young people could acquire maturity and

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would help them perform well when they join the

university

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. A final benefit is that young people will probably earn some money when they

work

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before joining the

university

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.

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money can be used to pay their

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fees.

On the other hand

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, there are more drawbacks when students spend a

year

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working or travelling before joking the

university

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. The

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one

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is that if young people decide to

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, they might get used to receiving an income and because of

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they will not want to come back to their student life anymore. The

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one

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is that travelling is a ex

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ensive activity and students who

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a

year

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requires a huge amount of money.

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could be spent on

university

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studies. What is more, most of the students are too young to

travel

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by themselves and

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might put them in more dangerous situations.

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, young students are not mature enough and they may get involved in illegal activities

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as selling drugs and crime. In conclusion,

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there are some advantages to travelling or working between high

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and

university

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, in my opinion, the disadvantages of

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practice outweigh the advantages.