WRITING TASK I You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph and chart below give information about 3D cinema screens and film releases. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features. and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart and line graph
shows
the size distribution of the Change the verb form
show
world'
s consumption of 3D cinema screens, Change noun form
world's
besides
the pattern of the numbers
of 3D film releases are likely to change from 2005 to 2012.
Overall
, The proportions of both 3D digital screens and films gradually increased over the first 4-year period, then
these figures surged significantly to approximately forty times during the last
five years.
A closer look at the data of line
graph reveals that the Correct article usage
the line
numbers
in the thousands of the three-dimensions cinema monitors slightly rose from almost zero in late 2005 to record around 7 thousand at the end
of 2008. Then
, this
number considerably increased to reach a peak at over 38, 000 in 2011.
On the other hand
, clearly, there were no animation films in 2005, 2006 and 2008. They just started to be produced in 2008, while
the live action
sequences remained stable at three releases. By 2006, The Add a hyphen
live-action
numbers
of generating action movies doubled year by year. It was 22 Fix the agreement mistake
number
ones
in 2012, meanwhile, the Correct pronoun usage
apply
films
which depended on Correct quantifier usage
number of films
the
computer animation sharply climbed to 72 releases.
Correct article usage
apply
To conclude
, The world's movie fans have a tendency of watching animated movies rather than the other type, this
can reflect the main reason why the increment in the numbers
of 3D cinema monitors.Fix the agreement mistake
number
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