WRITING TASK I You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph and chart below give information about 3D cinema screens and film releases. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features. and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The bar chart and line graph

shows

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the size distribution of the

world'

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s consumption of 3D cinema screens,

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the pattern of the

numbers

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of 3D film releases are likely to change from 2005 to 2012.

Overall

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, The proportions of both 3D digital screens and films gradually increased over the first 4-year period,

then

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these figures surged significantly to approximately forty times during the

last

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five years. A closer look at the data of

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graph reveals that the

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in the thousands of the three-dimensions cinema monitors slightly rose from almost zero in late 2005 to record around 7 thousand

at the end

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of 2008.

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this

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number considerably increased to reach a peak at over 38, 000 in 2011.

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, clearly, there were no animation films in 2005, 2006 and 2008. They just started to be produced in 2008,

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the

live action

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sequences remained stable at three releases. By 2006, The

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numbers

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number

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of generating action movies doubled year by year. It was 22

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in 2012, meanwhile, the

films

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which depended on

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computer animation sharply climbed to 72 releases.

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, The world's movie fans have a tendency of watching animated movies rather than the other type,

this

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can reflect the main reason why the increment in the

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numbers

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number

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of 3D cinema monitors.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

221 words

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