Some high school required all student to wear school; other high school permit students to decide what to wear to school.

Are
school
uniforms important? While some colleges, especially the ones in western countries, allow their students to determine what they wear to
school
, schools here do not permit
such
and only wants their student to wear a specific
uniform
. In my view, I completely agree with the latter assertion. For those who leave the decision of what to wear to
school
for students, the claim is that
this
attitude does not affect the optimum goal of schooling-learning practical and theoretical principles of life. In supporting
this
point, it is said that once students in high schools are properly taught, the need to look at what is being worn becomes inconsequential. But, when they are allowed to loaf around rather than concentrate on
school
works,
then
things like fashion becomes a topic of consideration.
However
, in my opinion, which is the same as the belief in
this
part of the world,
school
uniform
is important to distinguish and create uniformity for colleges.
For example
, students of the numerous schools around my area can easily be differentiated, especially in moments of emergencies
such
as a large mass casualty.
Additionally
, it is
also
believed that wearing
uniform
Suggestion
uniforms
help remove any emphasis on fashion and makes education the focus. In
this
way, anxiety associated with fashion and the number of clothes a student put on per week is eliminated from their psychology. In conclusion, while some do not see the need for
school
uniform
in high schools because they believe it does not have a significant effect if the students are well taught, others think that a sense of identity is important and I share
this
view too
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