• In the 30 years the world has seen an increase in immigration. Many people point out the benefits of this, whereas others believe the negatives outweigh the positives. • Discuss both of these viewpoints and give your own opinions.

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In the 30 years, there has been an increasing trend that more and more people choose to

immigrate

leave one's country of residence for a new one

emigrate

Therefore

, some people claiming the negatives outweigh the positives

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I agree with

this

viewpoint. Admittedly, it seems to be true that immigrating can bring troves

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about

benefits

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the benefits

, especially for

individual

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individuals

the individual

, Obviously, for those immigrants, when they chose a more risky and

new life

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the new life

they had to communicate with different people and integrate with

local culture

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the local culture

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it was a good opportunity to broad horizons and explore more about the world.

For example

, if people immigrated to other country, learning and using the foreign language to communicate with others was essential.

Besides

, in most cases, people immigrated to countries where the standard of living was better than domestic,

This

meant that they could stand on a higher platform and meet more intelligent people, which helped to improve themselves and achieve their dreams

However

, since everything has two sides, the negative effects of increased immigration cannot be ignored. Life is always awash in uncertainties and may not be as happy and simple as imagined, Living away from familiar relatives and friends, the people who choose to immigrate cannot obtain other’s helps timely, particularly when they faced different types of difficulties and problems.

For instance

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in a few countries, racial discrimination has existed for a long time, even sometimes, locals may isolate foreigners. Under that situation, it cost time and energy to deal with these issues and gradually used to loneliness

Moreover

, increasing immigration brought the key curse for the development of hometown-—

labor

a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages

labour

shortage. As more and more people leave their home to work

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other cities, it was harmful for

local economy

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the local economy

local economies

. Because, it produced insufficient

labor

a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages

labour

, low productivity and if

government

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the government

had not

make

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made

perfect policies to curb

this

trend, in

long term

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the long term

, the total output will decline and it cannot meet people’s increasing need,

finally

, influencing the standards of living. Overall

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although

immigrating brought reams of new opportunities to

individual

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individuals

the individual

However

, due to it will be harmful to the development of hometown if the trend has not been controlled, the negatives outweigh the positives.

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Fully explain your ideas

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