• In the 30 years the world has seen an increase in immigration. Many people point out the benefits of this, whereas others believe the negatives outweigh the positives. • Discuss both of these viewpoints and give your own opinions.
In the 30 years, there has been an increasing trend that more and more people choose to
immigrate
. leave one's country of residence for a new one
emigrate
Therefore
, some people claiming the negatives outweigh the positives .
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this
viewpoint.
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individuals
the individual
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the new life
local culture
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the local culture
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it was a good opportunity to broad horizons and explore more about the world. Accept space
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For example
, if people immigrated to other country, learning and using the foreign language to communicate with others was essential. Besides
, in most cases, people immigrated to countries where the standard of living was better than domestic, This
meant that they could stand on a higher platform and meet more intelligent people, which helped to improve themselves and achieve their dreams
However
, since everything has two sides, the negative effects of increased immigration cannot be ignored. Life is always awash in uncertainties and may not be as happy and simple as imagined, Living away from familiar relatives and friends, the people who choose to immigrate cannot obtain other’s helps timely, particularly when they faced different types of difficulties and problems. For instance
,
in a few countries, racial discrimination has existed for a long time, even sometimes, locals may isolate foreigners. Under that situation, it cost time and energy to deal with these issues and gradually used to loneliness
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,
Moreover
, increasing immigration brought the key curse for the development of hometown-— labor
shortage. As more and more people leave their home to work a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
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the local economy
local economies
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made
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trend, in long term
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the long term
finally
, influencing the standards of living.
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, due to it will be harmful to the development of hometown if the trend has not been controlled, the negatives outweigh the positives.Submitted by 1556046767 on
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