The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph gives information about the
percentage
of the population aged 65 and over in three
countries
over a
one
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hundred-year period between 1940 and 2040.
Overall
, the
proportion
of the elderly population in
three
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countries
is predicted to increase, and the
percentage
of elderly
people
in
Japan
will reach its peak in 2040. In 1940,
Japan
was the country with the lowest
proportion
of
the
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elderly
people
(5%), compared to approximately 7% in
Sweden
and 9% in the USA. By 1980, the
percentage
of elderly
people
in the US and
Sweden
was 15% and 14%, respectively,
while
the figure for
Japan
declined dramatically by 2%. From 1980 to 2020, there was a fluctuation in the
proportion
of elderly
people
in the US and
Sweden
, and the
percentage
of elderly
people
in
Japan
climb considerably (by 5%). Between 2020 and 2040, the
proportion
of elderly
people
in three
countries
will grow significantly. The
percentage
of
elderly
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population in
Japan
is predicted to increase dramatically, with a jump of over 17% in just 10 years from 2030 to 2040. During the same period, the
proportion
of elderly
people
in the US and
Sweden
increases by 5% and 5% respectively. Looking into the future, by 2040,
Japan
will be the
countries
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country
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with the highest
proportion
of elderly
people
(27%), compared to approximately 25% in
Sweden
and 23%
for
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the US.
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