Some people said that it is kind of waste if people plan for the future and it is more important to focus on the present. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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a kind of waste. Whereas, others argue that focusing on the present days are far more important. In my opinion, I will tend to agree with the idea that people should look forward the future as there are many things that they can encounter. There are a number of reasons why people should be ready for their future by collecting their own things.

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, the most important factor in our society is money, playing a role from your personal usage to community development. If we use all of our money at once, we may face difficulties later time.

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, in health problem, nowadays there are many new diseases and weird virus that can take the life of everyone. So, without sufficient wage, no one can cure that cost a lot. We should save properties for our forthcoming time for

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, some kinds of work, especially non government organizations that do not provide their employee pension after retirement. If they do not use their wage properly, they will encounter many difficulties as they have less chance to get another job at that time.

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, there are some people who assert that it is better to focus on the current day. They argue that they cannot easily get back

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

253 words

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Some people said that it is kind of waste if people plan for the future and it is more important to focus on the present. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Include an introduction and conclusion

The best way to reduce crime among youngsters is to teach parents good parenting skills. Do you agree or disagree.

Some people prefer to raise children in the cities while others believe that children should be raised in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some students work while studying.This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. what do you think are the cause of this ? what solution can you suggest?

The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.