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Some people are of the opinion that the best gift to give teenagers is Money, others think otherwise. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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There is no doubt, that the birthday is the best holiday mostly for everyone. But some people argue, whether it is better to give
money
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 for teens, or
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 presents.
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 with, I consider that every type of gifts is very good if you put heart into it. But many teenagers prefer to have a
money
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 for their birthday. According to the statistics, nowadays approximately 87 percent of teens want to have the
money
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 for the holidays. On the one hand, one of the beneficial evident of giving
money
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 to teenagers is that they will have the capability of standing up on their own.
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, youth can spend
money
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 for themselves pleasure. On the flip side, some people believe that
money
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 should not be the most suitable gift for young people. Giving
money
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 to
young
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younger
 generations who just enter into the society and are prone to dangerous activities can be a way of spoiling them. Put simply, teenagers when they possess
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money which
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money, which
 are given free of charge will be attracted to disgrace activities including usages of alcohol, drugs to name a few.
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, teenagers who are expected to pursue higher studies should not be disturbed with these gifts and items should be presented to them which encourage their studies
such
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 as books, tablets etc. To recapitulate, while some people think that
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 is the best present teenagers can be given with, they are people in the opinion of giving
money
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 as gifts should not be practiced. In my opinion, I believe that teenagers should be not offered
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 as gifts and they should receive items other than
money
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 which ameliorate their education.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Financial freedom
  • Money management
  • Practicality
  • Irresponsible spending
  • Thoughtfulness
  • Creativity
  • Sentimental value
  • Tailored gifts
  • Interests
  • Hobbies
  • Balance
  • Personal circumstances
  • Memorable gifts
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