Some countries show criminal trials publicly on the Tv. Is there more advantages or disadvantages to this?

The judge proceeding very serious process in every society
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Other states show criminal trials on the public television
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In my opinion that
tele casting
broadcasting visual images of stationary or moving objects
telecasting
court proceeding has
more drawback
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more drawbacks
a more drawback
than the benefits.
firstly
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Firstly
the public can learn a lot about the court proceeding
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In other
words people
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words, people
wil
the capability of conscious choice and decision and intention
will
have more awareness which can be helpful
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Secondly wathching
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Secondly, watching
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the criminal on trial can serve as a warning to other crime
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As
a
result it
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result, it
can help to reduce the crime rate
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For
example in
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example, in
my country government reported
15 % decline
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a 15 % decline
in the
wrong doing
departure from what is ethically acceptable
wrongdoing
among youth in 2018 due to the televising of law courts
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In
conclusion despite
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conclusion, despite
the benefits the drawback of an open television trial could be disastrous due to the public and media pressure
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Many countries
seen
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have seen
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someone who has committed a crime or has been legally convicted of a crime
criminal
trials
publicy
not private; open to or concerning the people as a whole
public
on the public television.
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