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Write a letter to the hotel, making the arrangements. In your letter tell them when you will be arriving and leaving explain what type of rooms you would like, and  ask how much the weekend will cost  ask about activities and places of interest near the hotel

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to reserve a room for a family at your hotel as well
request
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as request
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 more information about places of interest and activities in the area. I will be arriving with my wife and
one
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 child to spend the Chinese New Year holiday weekend. We would like to book in on the evening of Friday 27th and check out on Monday 30th at around
lunch time
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lunchtime
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. We would like to book
one
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 room with
one
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 double bed and
one
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 single bed
as well as
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 a private bathroom. We would prefer a
sea side
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seaside
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 view, if possible,
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balcony
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a balcony
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. Could you please tell me how much
this
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 would cost for the weekend ? During
are
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our
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 stay, we intend to see as much as possible of the local area. We have been told about the castle and maritime museum but could not find the information about
opening
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the opening
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 time and admission price.
In addition
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 are there any
further
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 places that you would recommend to
visitor
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visitors
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 to the area? I would
also
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 greatly appreciate
if
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it if
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 you could provide me
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with the
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the
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a
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 list of activities that children could take part
during
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in during
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 their stay. I look forward to hearing from you.
Your
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Yours
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 faithfully ABC
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single idea per paragraph
Ensure each paragraph contains only one main idea for clearer structure.
general linguistic accuracy
Check for small grammatical inaccuracies to enhance clarity and precision.
complete response
The letter provides a complete and clear response to the task, outlining arrival and departure details, room preferences, cost inquiries, and a request for local activities and attractions.
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is suitably formal and polite, appropriate for making a formal request to a hotel.
logical structure
The letter follows a logical structure with a clear greeting, body, and closing.
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