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Nowadays people get married and have their kids in their thirties rather than when they are younger. Do you agree or disagree that this trend will benefit society?

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Evidence suggests that, people, these days, get married and have their children in older ages. I completely agree with
this
 statement due to the couple of reasons I will discuss with elaboration.
To begin
 with, people can be m
ore awareness
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more aware
in the period of thirties rather than in younger ages because they know u
ps
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the ups
and downs of lifestyle. Positive and negative of lifestyle if people do not consider them and c
areless
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care
care less
caring
about these perennial problems, people will have severe problems and will f
ace
become less clearly visible or distinguishable; disappear gradually or seemingly
fade
with divorcing. Simply put, people have been w
ritten
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writing
their plans, goals and aims for more than years because they had a lot of time to concentrate on their schedule to have a better lifespan. Another compelling r
easons
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reason
might be psychologist which causes people to be m
ore conscience
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more conscientious
and they will show b
etter way
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a better way
for people t
o thought
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think
about their lives.
Although
 people rely on scientists, so confide to them shape their personality at older ages. To put it differently, improving their personality stems from make better decision for all l
ives.
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life
 So, better decision occurs in later ages when people become more mature. Yet, people c
an be mature
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can mature
in early a
ges but
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ages, but
they have less experience and lack of opportunity to get married these two have a significant key o
n
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in
p
eople
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peoples'
peoples
lives. Less opportunity to get married causes they d
o not
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do, not
how to behave with people who wants to propose. s
o
to a very great extent or degree
So
they have less experience to face with getting married and growing children. In the same vein, people must be having professional knowledge and to gain a competitive edge of growing children. In conclusion, for the aforementioned a
bove I
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above, I
totally agree that get married and have their kids must be useful and effective in the age of thirties while in younger a
ges they
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ages, they
do not have b
etter experience
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a better experience
for both upbringings their children and have b
etter life
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a better life
better lives
with their spouse. In fact, psychologists have a key role o
n
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in
one’s life.
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