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Some people say that Ebooks and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Over the period of time, latest
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 is being used in almost all industries to make processes easy and cheap. Few people believe that digital books and modern
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 will vanish the
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 of print media and magazines. As digitization has a big impact on print media, to a certain extent I agree that ebooks will replace the traditional newspapers and magazines.
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 will completely replace the
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 of papers for news and articles. There is a big impact of digital
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 like the internet and smart phones in our day to day life. So it is really easy to get any of the latest news or magazines in our smartphones from any part of the world with the help of internet whereas newspaper or magazines may not be available everywhere. Sometimes it is possible to get regional newspapers from other countries.
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, migrated people who live in the other part of the world can read newspapers or magazines in their regional language.
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, digital media has its environmental advantage as well.
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 of ebooks will reduce the amount of trees being cut to produce papers for newspapers and magazines.
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 to that, modern
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 enables fast access of any of the articles. People can read any of the article or news anytime with the help of internet.
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, over
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 of any of the digital
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 is harmful for health. Since the digital screen is required to
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 any of the ebook, it harms our eyes and sometimes by looking at the screen constantly at screen people feel uncomfortable. In conclusion, as every latest thing has their own pros and cons, ebooks and modern
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 has
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. It will reduce the
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 of paper, but not completely as per my opinion.

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