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Some people believe that every human can create art. Other people think that art can only be created by people with special talents. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It is said that
art
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 is something
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 inseparable from our lives. While some believe that only talented people can create
art
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, I agree with those who feel that everyone has the ability to do so. On the one hand, some people think that
creation
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the creation
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 is only possible for people who possess special skills. They argue that only these people can be successful.
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, human history only recorded the achievements of those artists who were famous in their field,
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 as Mozart in the music industry.
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, it is sometimes claimed that not every human can survive in
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 competitive sector.
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, someone may be interested in
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acting, but
 they cannot become a successful actor unless they are extremely good at acting.
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, I hold the opinion that
creation
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the creation
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 does not require special skills. I think that
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 talent can be acquired through practice. Playing piano,
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, needs passion and long hours of practice in order to play the music without error. I wholeheartedly believe that all of us can become a professional pianist as long as we are passionate about it.
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, I think that everyone has the ability to create
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art
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art, although
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 there is a difference between a good one and a bad one. It is undeniable that some movies are not as popular as some other blockbusters;
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, these are still masterpieces regardless of the quality. In conclusion, even though usually talented people are more likely to survive in the industry, everyone can still be a professional artist as long as they put in enough effort.
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, on balance, I believe that
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the creation
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 is not limited to any particular individual.

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