You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Dear Sir, I would like to express my gratitude for allocating me an

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at the college hostel. I am writing to inform you that, my dissatisfaction with my roommate and requesting a separate single room

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month. Despite

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having so many problems living together, I am stating some of those are very serious. Begins with, he used to stay awake till the late night and keep watching movies and

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loud music. Another disturbing habit is, he allows visitors often at our place and

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all night long while keeping the lights on until they are finished.

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, he uses my belongings without prior permission and missing regularly. Unfortunately, during my terms, it makes me struggle more on concentrating my studies and having a good night’s sleep. As a consequence, I cannot do well in exams and consistently getting poor grades. In the circumstance, I cannot let it go as it is affecting my health and study both ways and needed to change my accommodation immediately. So, I would be grateful if you could arrange

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month. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Mahmudul Hasan