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"Any sufficiently advanced
technology
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is indistinguishable from magic" and the ones who don't
believe
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Believe
in magic, will never be able to find the greatest of secrets.
Technology
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is the heart and soul of any Nation; it is the chariot on which the developing nations
gallop
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to compete with the developed nations while the developed ones
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optimize it for their advancement. Making
technology
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a sine qua non with
ones
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one's
daily life, helps people benefit in unimaginable ways by not just reducing their manual and physical
hardships but
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hardships, but
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giving them
ample amount
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an ample amount
of help in
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further utilization
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the further utilization
of their brains and
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in short,
technology
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helps in optimizing human efficiency. Contrary to
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, a hard fact is that no matter how fast and functional a weaving machine
works
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work
, the cost and the clientele of the hand woven cloth is at an altogether different level.
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Therefore I
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Therefore, I
strongly disagree that the traditional skills die out with the use of latest
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and I shall articulate
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contention of mine in the forthcoming paragraphs. To commence with,
first
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and foremost
technology
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helps to make peoples life simple, comfortable and effective by tailoring to their daily needs and
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helping in the
effectivity
the state of being inactive
inactivity
of the individual and ultimately the productivity of the nation at large by saving on the time and energy. Almost every major and minor company across different sectors in every country has some or the other form of
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technology which
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technology, which
plays a part in their business
process
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process, for
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example in
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example, in
Gujarat, India, the very famous diamond business has increased its production multi-fold because of the use of the latest
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simultaneously along with the traditional skills of craftsmanship, on which it relies, which eventually has now become an intrinsic part of it,
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proving that both latest
technology
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and traditional skills go hand-in-hand.
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, the simple availability of
technology
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is not
self-sufficient but
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self-sufficient, but
what channelizes the growth is the effective exploitation of the
technology
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at hand and
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it can be used to impart holistic knowledge and develop
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sets of skills which again would ultimately help an individual and through the collective action, a nation to grow and progress.
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has become
such
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an essential part of everyday life that it is impossible to alienate it from anything, be it education, businesses, health, government administration, etc and
this
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has been reiterated by the famous magazine The Times of India in one of its article saying that, "about 258 million companies use amalgamation of latest technologies and traditional skills in their businesses every year" To conclude, I would like to juxtapose by saying that the growth of a nation riding on latest
technology
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sans the traditional skills would be equivalent to buying a petrol driven expensive car without a fuel tank, it would look appealing while standing still but it would not serve its true purpose,
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people and their nations should give equal priority to both the aspects for a sustainable and omnipresent growth.

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