Since most information about culture and history can be found on the internet, museums are not needed anymore. To what extend do you agree..

There is a view that it is now worthless to

visit

museum

Suggestion

a museum

the museum

to gain knowledge about different

culture

and history as these

days all

Accept comma addition

days, all

information

related to

this

are available on the internet. I completely disagree with

this

thought.

First

of all, the depth

information

regarding

culture

which

can not

can not

cannot

gain through electronic medium on the internet as they only cover brief view about it.

For example

, it is easy to adopt basic ideas about different social group’s clothes and structure of

house

Suggestion

the house

from the pictures

availalble

obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service

available

on the

internet but

Accept comma addition

internet, but

to feel about the atmosphere in reality, people has to

visit

the

museum

because

museum

Suggestion

the museum

is

such

a place where things from different heritage and ethics are being stored for viewing

purpose

Suggestion

purposes

.

Thus

, less

information

from the computer can be

misguid

poorly conceived or thought out

misguided

or can not

fulfill

put in effect

fulfil

one’s desire for understanding different

culture

which can only be done in

physical

Suggestion

a physical visit

visit

in

Suggestion

to

the

museum

. Another one is that people used to be more motivated by looking, touching and

listening

(law) a proceeding (usually by a court) where evidence is taken for the purpose of determining an issue of fact and reaching a decision based on that evidence

hearing

about history compare to reading about them online.

For instance

, learning about how one’s country got the freedom in a war by

visting

the activity of making visits

visiting

war

museum

is more effective than reading in the article online.

In other words

, people feel more inspired and understand the value of their freedom through monuments and equipment being used in the war of freedom.

Result

Suggestion

The result

of

this

, energetic

youngester

a young person of either sex

youngster

youngsters

sometime do register

themself

reflexive form of "them"

themselves

with the

defence

Suggestion

defending

army after visiting

such

museum

and that develops country’s army strength. In conclusion,

although

infromation

a message received and understood

information

related various

culture

Suggestion

cultures

and history available on the

interenet

a computer network consisting of a worldwide network of computer networks that use the TCP/IP network protocols to facilitate data transmission and exchange

internet

intranet

, it

can not

can not

cannot

fulfill

put in effect

fulfil

people’s requirement in terms of depth

information

and motivation. To do so, personal

visit

to

such

museum

is required.