Nowadays shopping has become a new favorite pastime for young people. What are the reasons for this? should they be encouraged to develop other hobbies?

In the recent years, shopping is the prime hobby for the teenage people. I assume that
this
may be they are not finding other options which was present in the past.I believe whether or not younger generation should involve themselves productive activities like reading
.
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Going to the outlet for purchasing goods become one the important habit for the juvenile. Due to the rising amount of a shopping centre
,
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,
and
also
those places are so near to residents, went for buying easily.
Although
they do not need any particular product.
For example
, researcher published an article in the Time magazine that 80% young people
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.
Thus
, it is clear that going to shopping is increased because of
conveniency
the state of being suitable or opportune
convenience
. Younger citizen should adopt
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
kind of pastime
such
as reading or swimming. By studying they can develop their inner sense of humour, followed by learning or practicing swimming would be kept them fit. Having said that a teenage
people
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person
should use their time effectively. If they use their time with shaping their
next
life, it would bring more best ramification than doing
shopping
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the shopping
leisurely.
For example
, people who read lots of novel develop more sense of humour than other people, those people can solve their everyday problem easily without help
of
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from
others.
Therefore
, it is indeed important to incorporate with different activities by the teen. In conclusion, despite being the habit of a younger
generations
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generation
to go to
mall
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the mall
a mall
for
this
easiets
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easier
easiest
route.
Indeed it
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Indeed, it
is necessary to develop reading habit as well as swimming for their better health for
future
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the future
.
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