The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph provides information about the
amount
of fast food consumed in the United Kingdom over a twenty-years period between 1970 and 1990.
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chips
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a hamburger
the hamburger
hamburger
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, consumption, hamburger, fish, chips, pizza, people, grams with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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