The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph provides information about the
amount
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of fast food consumed in the United Kingdom over a twenty-years period between 1970 and 1990.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the
consumption
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of
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hamburger
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hamburgers
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,
fish
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and
chips
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increased considerably.
In addition
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, the
amount
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of
pizza
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that
people
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consumed declined gradually. In 1970,
Pizza
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was the kind of fast food with the highest
consumption
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, on average,
people
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consumed 300
grams
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, compared to
approximated
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60
grams
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for
fish
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and
chips
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,
40
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and 40
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grams
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for
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a hamburger
the hamburger
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hamburger
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hamburgers
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. Between 1970 and 1980, there was a sharp growth in the
amount
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of
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hamburger
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hamburgers
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,
fish
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and
chips
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consumed; to 80
grams
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and 150
grams
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respectively.
In contrast
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, there was a rapid drop in the
amount
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of
pizza
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that
people
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consumed, from 300
gram
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grams
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to 220
grams
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. In 1985, the
consumption
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of
pizza
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plummeted
significant
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to 200
grams
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; the
amount
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of
hamburger
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consumed continued to rise to 120
grams
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. From 1985 to 1990, the
amount
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of
fish
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and
chips
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reached its peak at 500
grams
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. During the same period, there was a dramatic growth in the
amount
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of
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hamburger
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hamburgers
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that
people
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consumed from 120
grams
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to 280
grams
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.
Moreover
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, there was a slight increase in the
consumption
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of
pizza
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, with a rise of over 10
grams
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in just 5 years from 1985 to 1990.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, consumption, hamburger, fish, chips, pizza, people, grams with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption trends
  • steady increase
  • most consumed meat
  • relatively stable
  • general decline
  • pronounced decline
  • over the years
  • throughout the period
  • depicts
  • span
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