Write a letter to the editor to give your opinion about a magazine that you purchased. Include Why you bought it What you liked and disliked about it Suggestions for improvement

Dear Editor, I am writing
this
letter to give you some feedback on the latest edition of the Femina magazine I bought from a local newspaper stand
next
to my home.
Although
I am a dentist by profession, I have a keen interest in the fashion industry. As Femina is the top magazine in
this
field, I take a yearly subscription for the same.
Thus
, helping me to stay updated about the latest trends. I really appreciate the content of the stories in the present issue, especially, the interview of Masaba about her peacock designs. All the details from the idea to the costing of the final product are covered in depth.
However
, I feel that the section on cosmetics has more scope of coverage. The content provided is very little. I would suggest if you can reduce the quiz section and give more articles about the comparison of different foundation brands and which can suit a particular skin type.
In addition
, how can the use of a
sun block
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sunblock
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enhance the final look be covered as well
.
Change the punctuation
?
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I hope you consider my suggestions Yours faithfully, Sonia Ahuja

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