In many countries government spend a lot of money on arts. However, some think government should spend more on health and education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The graphs illustrate the structure of a local
museum
, which was small in size, and its view in both 1957 and 2007. Overall, the
museum
refurbished with numerous elements
such
as special exhibition, education
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
, shop, cafe, reception, and car parking.
Conversely
, the garden road stayed same as before. In 1957, there was a national history exhibition held with divided on two
part
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parts
like special exhibition and learning
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
in 2007.
Next
the local history room doubled in 2007, and there
were
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was
a new shop, reception place built. Interestingly, in 2007 a cafe
was include
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was included
included
for the visitors.
Besides
, The entrance hall located beside the store room in 2007, which replaced in 2007 with the
museum
shop.
Moreover
, the road found same in both
timeline
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timelines
,
however it
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however, it
was attached
with
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to
museum
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the museum
in 2007.
Finally
, the garden situated at the same position, but the amount reduced in 2010.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • allocation of funds
  • budget allocation
  • cultural heritage
  • public expenditure
  • quality of life
  • economic growth
  • social inequality
  • public-private partnership
  • fiscal responsibility
  • long-term benefits
  • innovative solutions
  • underprivileged communities
  • life expectancy
  • technological advancements
  • preservation of culture
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