You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend.

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Dear Sam, Hi! I hope you are doing well, and I am writing

this

letter to inform you about my change in plan for visiting Canada due to the engagement ceremony of my elder sister. I know you are astonished to hear

this

news as it happened so fast. Actually, one of my father’s friends recently visited India with his family and they find my sister as a suitable match for their son, so we planned their engagement

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Saturday as they have to return back to their country after that. I am really sorry as you have to do lots of amendments

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your schedule, but

this

was something for which I have no prior clue. I know you already had applied for leaves from your office, so I suggest you postpone your leaves plan for 1 week. I would be there on 3rd March and I already mailed to airline company about

this

. Tickets, which I purchased online for Wonderland have validity for 15 days, so make yourself ready to visit that place

first

after when I reached there as

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tour could be enjoyed later. Once again, I really apologize for the inconvenience due to

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the change

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in dates. Pay my regards to uncle and aunty. Yours truly, Andrew

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

212 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

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