You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend.

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Dear Sam, Hi! I hope you are doing well, and I am writing

this

letter to inform you about my change in plan for visiting Canada due to the engagement ceremony of my elder sister. I know you are astonished to hear

this

news as it happened so fast. Actually, one of my father’s friends recently visited India with his family and they find my sister as a suitable match for their son, so we planned their engagement

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Saturday as they have to return back to their country after that. I am really sorry as you have to do lots of amendments

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your schedule, but

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was something for which I have no prior clue. I know you already had applied for leaves from your office, so I suggest you postpone your leaves plan for 1 week. I would be there on 3rd March and I already mailed to airline company about

this

. Tickets, which I purchased online for Wonderland have validity for 15 days, so make yourself ready to visit that place

first

after when I reached there as

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tour could be enjoyed later. Once again, I really apologize for the inconvenience due to

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the change

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in dates. Pay my regards to uncle and aunty. Yours truly, Andrew

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You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend.

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In theie advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?