Some people view teenage conflict with their parents as a necessary part of growing up, whilst others see it as something negative which should be avoided. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In "Many Faces of madness", a shorten documentary written by Amar Kanwar, natural recourses have been destroyed by human’s greediness.
For instance
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, four centuries ago local irrigation was established by
Indian ancestor
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an Indian ancestor
in order to harness common water; yet, when everyone has belong land the water system became a desert because of capitalism.
This
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shows the current impact of
human’s
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human
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviours
such
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as deforestation, mangrove destruction and
overexploitation
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which damage biodiversity and do harm to the environment.
This
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phenomenon does not only occur in India, but it is
also
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widespread around the world.
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, Thailand has faced a lot of environmental problems, which becomes a very significant government's concern.
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, some capitalists cut down lots of trees in
conserved forest
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a conserved forest
so as to set up their own businesses
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as resorts or hotels.
This
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action is illegal and the government should solve
this
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problem by promulgating the set of environmental rules and punishing seriously anyone against it.
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, huge heaps of chemical waste was were found nearby local watercourse, which can
affects
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affect
native communities. It is seen that there is a huge amount of household waste
in most of capital
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in most capital
cities.
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, Bangkok, which is the capital city of Thailand, has suffered severe water pollution because of a lot of waste dumped into the rivers. It is not only freshwater animals’
harmfulness
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harmful
it can affect human health
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. To put it in a nutshell, environmental problems are common problems of all
humandkind
all of the living human inhabitants of the earth
humankind
because they can cause
butterfly effect
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a butterfly effect
which can affect other countries as well.
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, not only does the government have responsibility for
environment
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environmental
protection and conservation, but each individual should
also
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contribute to help the environment.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • autonomy
  • individuality
  • emotional intelligence
  • conflict resolution skills
  • persistent
  • unresolved
  • communication gaps
  • rebellious behavior
  • substance abuse
  • mental health issues
  • critical skills
  • deeper understanding
  • family dynamics
  • quest for independence
  • crucial for adulthood
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