The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 200 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 200 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph provides information about the quality of six different kinds of
energy
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in the United States, measured by
quadrillion
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units
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, between 1980 and 2030.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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almost the
amount
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of
power
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that people consumed,
such
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as fuels, coal, natural
gas
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, nuclear and solar/
wind
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is predicted to increase;
however
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, the
consumption
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of
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hydro
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hydropower
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power
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still will
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in fifty years from 1980 to 2030. In 1990, fuel was the kind of
energy
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with the highest
consumption
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, on average, people used 35
quadrillion
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units
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;
compered
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compared
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to
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20
quadrillion
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units
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for natural
gas
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, and 16
quadrillion
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energy
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for coal.
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the figure for nuclear, solar/
wind
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and
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hydro
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hydropower
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power
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were
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about the same as 4
quadrillion
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units
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. From 1980 to 2015 the quality of coal and natural
gas
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jumped slowly, and both consumed around 25
quadrillion
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units
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. Meanwhile, petrol and oil continued to increase to 43
quadrillion
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units
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; the
amount
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of nuclear, solar/
wind
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and
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hydro
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hydropower
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power
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consumed 6
quadrillion
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units
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, 5
quadrillion
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units
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and 4
quadrillion
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units
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respectively. Over a five-year period between 2020 to 2025, the
amount
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of natural
gas
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, nuclear, solar/
wind
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and
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hydro
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hydropower
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power
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will remain stable at roughly 25
quadrillion
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units
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, 7
quadrillion
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units
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, 5
quadrillion
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units
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and 4
quadrillion
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units
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respectively. The
consumption
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of fuel and coal will experience
upward
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an upward
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trend during the same period. Between 2025 and 2030, Petro and oil
consumption
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will rise significantly to 49
quadrillion
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energy
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and it will be expected the highest figure in the line graph.
Besides
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, the
amount
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of coal will climb considerably to 31
quadrillion
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units
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. Looking into the future, an inconsiderable increase in the
consumption
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of nuclear and solar, with a rise of over 1
quadrillion
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energy
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in just five years from 2025 to 2030.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, quadrillion, units, amount, power, gas, wind, consumption, hydro with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "considerably" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • depicts
  • trend
  • consumption
  • projections
  • slow growth
  • advancements
  • efficiency
  • acceleration
  • underscoring
  • expanding economy
  • household demands
  • trajectory
  • technological advancements
  • population growth
  • standards of living
  • renewable energy
  • fossil fuels
  • sustainable energy policies
  • environmental impacts
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