The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagrams illustrate
about
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apply

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how the
wave-
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wave-energy

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energy
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machine
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is designed and the suitable station for it.
Overall
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the engine works with the help of the
waves
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on the seashore. Looking at the diagram the appliance has two chambers, one is beneath the
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sea water
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seawater

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related to
waves
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and the other chamber id is combined with turbines and
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a generator
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a generator

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generator
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generators
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above the expanse
water
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of water

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. With regards to water level and
waves
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, air flow
pass
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passes

The plural verb pass does not appear to agree with the singular subject air flow. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.

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through to the canal through
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second
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the second

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chamber and by that,
turbine
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the turbine

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rotates
voluntary
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voluntarily

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.
Similarly
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, air flow from outside pass inside the chamber,
the
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and the

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other turbine rotates
also
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. Meanwhile, the generator would produce
the
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apply

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electricity depending on the power of the
air flow
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airflow

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. Over to the position of
wave
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the wave

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energy
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machine
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, the diagram demonstrates there are two locations, one
in
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at

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deep
sea
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level and the other near
to
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apply

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the shore in less deep. The spot in the deep
sea
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cost of installation is highly expensive compared to the mid surf
,
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but can produce high power of
energy
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with the help of larger
waves
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.
On the other
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hand
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,hand

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mid
sea
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level
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machine
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machines

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will produce less power
of
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apply

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energy
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because
due to
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smaller
waves
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.
To sum up
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,
cost
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the cost

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of
insatallation
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installation

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is high for large wave output in
deep
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the deep

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sea
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than
to
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for

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mis
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miss

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sea
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spot
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spots

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, but
efficiency
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the efficiency

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of electricity produced is higher for large wave
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machine
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machines

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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, machine, waves, sea with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagrams" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "wave" was used 9 times.
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