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Popular events like the football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Recently, sporting events
such
 as football World Cup have reached to the zenith of popularity. Nowadays, the debate whether they ease international tensions and let go of the patriotic feelings or not has become highly disputatious. Supporters validate that they
decrease
 the
level
 of stress between countries.
On the other hand
, opponents proclaim that it increases the
level
 of tension during watching the matches on the television.
therefore
Suggestion
Therefore
, I should mention both points of view for you to judge, shouldn't I?
This
 essay will discuss both views. Not only do supporters believe that these occasions enable the
decrease
 in international tensions, but it
also help
Suggestion
also helps
has also helped
 in releasing patriotic emotions safely. In other word, it
decrease
Suggestion
decreases
 international barriers in sports.
For example
, if there was no football World Cup every few years, we wouldn't have probably heard about Spain (Real Madrid). To cut it short sports linked the whole world up together, especially, who share the same sports' interests. Despite the fact that there is a plethora of perks, we can't turn a blind eye up upon the drastic obvious drawbacks.
Although
 it is very crucial to watch sports regularly, it may lead to increased
level
Suggestion
levels
 of stress and that each watcher will be very tension towards his favourite team.
In addition
, that just watching sports harms the nervous system and may later lead on to a heart attack!! Excess interest in sports has a various of negative disadvantage. All in a nutshell, sport festivals
decrease
 the
level
 of international tension, but because every flower has a thorn, it
also
 leads to heart attacks. I think I moderately agree with his point of view; because it's very essential.
However
, I believe that equilibrium is the key behind it all. So, you have to balance between watching sports' occasions and avoiding too much anxiety.
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