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Some people think that scientists experimenting with animal in a laboratory is the only way we can guarantee new products will be safe for human use to what extent do you agree or disagree

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It is believed by some people that the safety of new products can only be ensured after they are tried on animals.I disagree with
this
 notion as the animals are
also
 creatures and we cannot harm them with any products of unknown constitution. Some people argue and I agree that experimenting on animals for the sake of protection of human beings has been a selfish attitude which human beings have adopted since long. For the sake of our own safety and protection, we humans, have murdered millions of animals for experimentation.
For instance
, man consider themselves the most superior creature and the whole universe was meant to serve the human beings.
Hence
, for their own survival, they can literally perish the entire universe.
Moreover
,
this
 would not stop here as the rich scientists are now paying poorer countries for poor people so that they could experiment with them as well. So, the selfish nature of human beings has no boundaries. Another issue to consider while experimenting on animals is that they
also
 have the feeling of pain.
This
 has been proven by the scientists that when animals are subjected to various tests, they
also
 feel pain and agony.So just for the purpose of experiments, it is unwise to put them in painful situations.
For instance
, the animal rights protection societies have established by few kind people to stop human beings from experimenting on animals who cannot express their pain. It is extremely difficult to see the animals suffer from cancer on which
teratogenic
 products have been tried. In conclusion, humans should stop experimenting on animals for the safety of products as there are several other ways like knowing the chemical composition and avoiding the products which have potential harmful effects.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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