Some experts believe that it is better to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In the present date, there are more and more private elementary
school
following globalize trend. Not only they add many
language
courses, but
also
import a lot of foreign teachers. Even so elementary students could receive these education with some drawback,
likewise
, their study schedule will be tight and it will increase a significant
burden
on the children.
This
essay will analyse the advantages and disadvantages of adding a foreign
language
classlanguage
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class language
class
in primary
school
.
To begin
with, the main disadvantages of teaching foreign
language
are growth disruption and high tuition cost. Even if the
school
could have added
language
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a language class
class
out of their good will, the student has to carry
burden
such
as, tight schedule, less play
time
and homework at
this
young age. As the growth is important for a child, these children need a certain amount of
time
for themselves to develop both mind and body.
For example
, they could not have many football match due to the tight schedule for
language
class
and become less active.
Besides
, elementary
school
with these
class
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classes
will have to increase their tuition fee to cover the increasing cost, as a consequence, their parents might have to withdraw their children from these
school
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schools
.
On the contrary
, the main advantage of teaching foreign
language
in a grade
school
is their age, free
time
and opportunity. Regarding the period of growth that have high capability to learn and adapt which they have a lot of free
time
, youthful mind, and full support from their parents.
Thus
, they could improve their skill quickly because these students do not have any
burden
. The higher grade
therefore have
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therefore has
has therefore had
to deal with their career path, homework, and necessary task.
Moreover
, if they could learn a secondary
languagelanguage
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language language
in their early education life, they might have had broadened their study while they are attending their high
school
period.
For example
, Robotic area which is infamous of majorly of its textbook were written in English. In the same manner, knowing the secondary
language
will broaden their social life. If they could have been proficient in English or known many languages, they might have made many foreign friends by now. To summarize, elementary
school
with foreign
language
class
can out weight the disadvantage as these children will need these benefits in their future. It is better if they could at least proficient with their secondary
language
before they enter their high
school
. As they could relieve
language
burden
beforehand.
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