A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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email regarding the advertisement you have published for hiring a waitress in your restaurant, which suits my conditions and abilities. I am currently working as a cashier in a supermarket near downtown;

however

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, I am moving to the area where your restaurant is located next week.

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, I will no longer be able to work in the supermarket

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the long commutation time

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its high expenses. I can describe myself as a responsible, committed, and caring person, who is able to work under pressure and tough working conditions, which all make me an appropriate person for

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position. If there is a chance to have a face-to-face interview, I would embrace it passionately. In two coming weeks, I will be working night shifts;

therefore

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, I will be available for an interview during daylight hours. I am looking forward to getting your reply, Best Regards,

mojgan.sobhani

Jun 10, 2024

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task achievement

You have provided a complete response, succinctly touching upon all aspects of the task. For an even better score, ensure each idea is expanded for a fuller discussion.

coherence cohesion

Some sentences could be better connected to improve the flow of your writing. Consider using more linking words and phrases.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing of your letter are perfectly suited for a formal letter.

task achievement

Your writing tone is professional and polite, which is highly appropriate for an application letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

158 words

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