The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The above graph shows the total number of
trips
made by children
in a country by
using different modes of Change preposition
apply
transport
in the years 1990 and 2010. It compares the usage of different modes of transport
to and from school by children
aged 5-12 years in the years 1990 and 2010.
In 1990, the graph shows walking as the most used means of transport
by children
while
travelling to and fro
school which is approximately 12.5 Correct your spelling
from
million
trips
. The mode of transport
which is least used in 1990 is car
which is approximately 4.5 Add an article
a car
the car
million
trips
. Cycling and walking and bus
are used almost similarly
as
Change preposition
with
round
6 Correct your spelling
around
million
in 1990. After walking, travelling by bus
is mostly used by children
in 1990.
In 2010, the graph shows car
as the most used Add an article
the car
transport
approximated to 11 million
trips
. However
, cycling is the least used mode of transport
approximated to 3 million
trips
. The other modes of transport
like walking and bus
are used as
around 6 Change preposition
apply
million
and 5 million
trips
in 2010. Walking and bus
together are used in almost 3 million
trips
.
In comparison
Add a comma
,comparison
car
is most used in 2010 Fix the agreement mistake
cars
while
walking was most used in 1990. However
, walking, cycling and bus
is used more in 1990 and less in 2010. It can be interpreted that with the advent of technology in 2010, cars were highly preferred as means of Wrong verb form
busing
transport
which reduced the usage of walking, cycling and bus
as means of transport
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