The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The above graph shows the total number of
trips
made by Use synonyms
children
in a country Use synonyms
by
using different modes of Change preposition
apply
transport
in the years 1990 and 2010. It compares the usage of different modes of Use synonyms
transport
to and from school by Use synonyms
children
aged 5-12 years in the years 1990 and 2010.
In 1990, the graph shows walking as the most used means of Use synonyms
transport
by Use synonyms
children
Use synonyms
while
travelling to and Linking Words
fro
school which is approximately 12.5 Correct your spelling
from
million
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trips
. The mode of Use synonyms
transport
which is least used in 1990 is Use synonyms
car
which is approximately 4.5 Add an article
a car
the car
million
Use synonyms
trips
. Cycling and walking and Use synonyms
bus
are used almost Use synonyms
similarly
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as
Change preposition
with
round
6 Correct your spelling
around
million
in 1990. After walking, travelling by Use synonyms
bus
is mostly used by Use synonyms
children
in 1990.
In 2010, the graph shows Use synonyms
car
as the most used Add an article
the car
transport
approximated to 11 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
trips
. Use synonyms
However
, cycling is the least used mode of Linking Words
transport
approximated to 3 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
trips
. The other modes of Use synonyms
transport
like walking and Use synonyms
bus
are used Use synonyms
as
around 6 Change preposition
apply
million
and 5 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
trips
in 2010. Walking and Use synonyms
bus
together are used in almost 3 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
trips
.
In Use synonyms
comparison
Add a comma
,comparison
car
is most used in 2010 Fix the agreement mistake
cars
while
walking was most used in 1990. Linking Words
However
, walking, cycling and Linking Words
Use synonyms
bus
is used more in 1990 and less in 2010. It can be interpreted that with the advent of technology in 2010, cars were highly preferred as means of Wrong verb form
busing
transport
which reduced the usage of walking, cycling and Use synonyms
bus
as means of Use synonyms
transport
in 2010.Use synonyms
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