In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult? What is your opinion about this?

People have different views about whether young people should be permitted to hang at night without

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adult’s

permission. Though it is often argued that

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, more or less, shows no respect

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youngsters, I think it is necessary to restrict them to go out at night. The principal concern about a curfew is the violation of children’s basic right. Some people even hold the viewpoint that restricting the young people at home would make them want to go out more earnestly. It’s like

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itch that you can’t scratch.

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, children should be endowed with freedom to make a decision on their own. The counter argument is that it is reasonable to do so. While retaining the freedom is necessary, the safety of their lives should be of a greater priority, given the situation in cities with

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crime rates

on the increase. If young people encounter street fighting, drug abuse, vehicle theft or even gang offence, how can they protect themselves from involving with

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criminal

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scenes. It might be

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safer

safest

to stay in homes considering the increasing deteriorated security environment of the society. And keeping teens with the family in the evening could

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be productive. Full-time working parents can exchange with

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the kids

about what they have experienced in the daytime. That might develop

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a closer relationship

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closer relationships

for family members. The conversations as well as the delicious food would become the most cherished memories in every children’s minds. A

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point is that children could do some helpful homeworks to improve his/her academic

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. To put it in a nutshell, I prefer the opinion of confining young people at home rather than wandering around at night. It would be more beneficial for the family members.