Under British and Australian laws a jury in a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime. Some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case. Do you agree or disagree?

A
decision
is very crucial act when it comes to
judiciary
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the judiciary
and criminal activities. A
decision
statement
is
fate deciding factor
Suggestion
a fate deciding factor
the fate deciding factor
for the accused and
also
for the victim. Judgement
is always been
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has always been
a debatable subject because
its
the thing named or in question
it
varies from person to person and the aspect which are taken into consideration before making any
decision
. Aspects plays a vital role in any
decision
making process so I agree with the
statement
that while making or before reaching to any judgement the past
records whether
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records, whether
its
it is
it's
criminal or any other which can affect the final verdict must be taken into consideration. My views and
explaination
a statement that makes something comprehensible by describing the relevant structure or operation or circumstances etc.
explanation
explanations
to support the
statement
is explained in the following paragraphs. On seeing the
brightside
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bright side
of the
statement
and
firstly
, why I agree with the lawyers who believes that, the jury must be aware of past facts before reaching on to any conclusion, is that there will not be any partiality or injustice with the accused or with the victim as if the any liberal
decision
is made
instead
of harsh one.
For instance
, if a criminal is sentenced to
few years
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a few years
of imprisonment for a
therft
the act of taking something from someone unlawfully
theft
who is already
been
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being
charged for murder previously which is not taken into consideration. Here, if the
past records
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past, records
were
checked
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checked, then
then
the
decision
may be taken for
life-time
the period during which something is functional (as between birth and death)
lifetime
imprisonment which is more suitable
then
of
few years
Suggestion
a few years
.
Secondly
, if the criminal is influenced or forced for their
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
or act of crime or that may be simply act of self defence, all can be proved by looking into individuals past records and social
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
.
Also
, real aspects and practical facts
helps
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help
a jury to get a clear vision and
also
increase the confidence to make a strong or harsh
decision
if required in delicate matters.
Moreover
, both parties
gets
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get
benefits from the change in the
law
and justice can be served very well if the new
law
implied to access the past records for the judges. To sum up, I would say that there is no harm in implementing the new
law
and by doing that we are just making our societies more safe and secure where the
law
and judiciary system is very adaptive with changes in the benefits of the public.
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