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It is becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of the media on our lives. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a media-rich society

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People have seen a considerable development of mass media and it has influenced on daily life positively as well as negatively. Two extremes of media will be discussed in
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 essay. Regarding
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benefits
, people receive a lot of convenience from media both at work and in entertainment. Telephone, the Internet help human communicate and exchange information easier.
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, people use television, radio, magazine to serve their daily life.
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, living in a society in which media
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are
 an integral part brings the World closer because of its ability to transmit information to everyone. Through television or the Internet,
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, one man can sit at home knowing all he wants to know about what are happening in the World. In contrary, there are still some drawbacks of media can be denied. The
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 negative influence is that citizens are depending more and more on
media
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the media
 and immersing in it. Many people spend hours in front of
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a screen
 of smartphone just watching videos serving no purpose.
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, the information that citizens receive from
media not
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the media, not
the media not
 one hundred percent true and people can be
misleaded
lead someone in the wrong direction or give someone wrong directions
misled
 by fake news and advertising delivered in
media
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the media
. In brief, living in a media-rich society has both positive and negative
effect
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effects
 on lives. It
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 means that people should be careful while interact with
media
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the media
 so that it can be used properly and effectively.

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