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Some people feel that it is difficult to do a public speech or presentation. Therefore, it is a good idea for children to learn to do speeches as early as possible. What is the importance of public speech in life? Do you agree or disagree that children should be taught public speaking skill at school?

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Nowadays, the importance of public
speech
 is becoming one of
a
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an
essencial
absolutely necessary; vitally necessary
essential
essentially
skill
 in our social life. Even though, a great many people is
struggle
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struggling
 to do a public
speech
 or
presentation
.
This
 essay will discuss regarding that importance of
speech
 in front of
crowd
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the crowd
a crowd
 and why I agree that children need to learn public speaking
skill
 at their
school
. In
morden
belonging to the modern era; since the Middle Ages
modern
 society, many people
can not
can not
cannot
 avoid
to do
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doing
 a public
speech
 or
presentation
. Those of them
is
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are
 closely related
in
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to
 business,
school
 or social life.
For example
, if you are a one of sales department member,
then
 you have a
brillient
of surpassing excellence
brilliant
 idea about sales model. You have to prepare your
presentation
 of your idea and explain your sales plan to your team member efficiently. It is totally connected with your career and achievement in your company. I completely agree that children need to learn a public speaking and
presentation
skill
. I believe that these skills need trained and prepared. Thos of them is not merely simple speaking. It
need
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needs
 to arrange ideas and information,
then
 it should be delivered to other people effectively. If children would obtain public
speech
 and
presentation
 at
school
, they would be more confidence in
face
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the face
 of many crowded. To sum up, the public
speech
 and
presentation
 is quite
significent
important in effect or meaning
significant
skill
 in our social life, due to introduce our ideas and opinions pretty well.
Moreover
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 support that teaching public speaking
skill
 to children at
school
, because of their future
oppotunity
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
.
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