Some people believe that modern designs for schools and offices with more open spaces are necessary. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such spaces? Give your opinion.
Some believer thinks wider open space in newly build school is essential, It has both pros and cons. Before expressing my opinion, both views need to be discussed, so in
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, fraction of thinkers argues that for sustainable development of child growth it is necessary to have a wider Linking Words
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in institutions, where they can play and do extra curricular activities which leads to their better mental and physical health. Scientifically it has been proved that when the upbringing of the child is healthy the they perform better in the future. Use synonyms
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, It provides an abundant field for all students to enjoy their free time along with that they get time to spend moments in the grasp of nature. Linking Words
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there air quality is purer rather than cosy areas as air passes fluently and frequently in an open location.
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, It is very hard to arrange large open zone for the construction in a metropolitan city. Linking Words
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, recently a magazine published an article which stated that day by day vacant space is diminishing rapidly which can cause a great danger for future generation. At the time of urbanization the cost of Linking Words
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increases as well as the responsibility of the faculty to manage students which they think of as a burden. Linking Words
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, Management gets less territory to utilize in the construction which leads to loss in revenue.
To conclude, it can be said that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. In my opinion development of young ones cannot be compromised due to the high expenses of the organization so the wider open arena is required in newly build education centres.Linking Words
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