The graph shows average annual expenditure on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The graph depicts a comparison
on
Change preposition
of
average
spending of the people of the U.S on Add an article
the average
the
mobile phones and landlines Correct article usage
apply
for
over the period of 10 years from 2001 to 2010.
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Overall
, it is evident that,
the annual spending on Remove the comma
apply
the
cellular Correct article usage
apply
phone
services has sharply increased during the given span of years. While
,
the residential dial services had a declining trend.
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apply
Firstly
, in the period 2001, the
people Correct article usage
apply
had
spent a huge amount on Unnecessary verb
apply
the
landline services. Correct article usage
apply
On the contrary
, they spent nearly six-time less amount on cellular phones $690 and $200 respectively. Also
, it can be noted, the money spent on mobile phones had hiked, but the landline expense had a drop at the same rate of $550 in 2006. In addition
, the land phone
users
spending pattern plunged to $490 in 2010. Change noun form
users'
user's
However
, the
cell Correct article usage
apply
phone
user spending had
reached a peak of nearly $800 in the same year.
To summarize, though the expense Unnecessary verb
apply
is
spent on residential service was high during 2001, Unnecessary verb
apply
but
Correct word choice
apply
nevertheless
later on with pace
of Correct article usage
the pace
movement
the spending on Add a comma
,movement
cellular
Add an article
the cellular
phone
had a dramatic increase in the given periods.Fix the agreement mistake
phones
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