In some countries it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four years old, while in others they do not have to start school until they are seven or eight. How far do you agree with either of these views?
Some people think that children aged
four
should be sent to Use synonyms
schools
while others believe that the most suitable Suggestion
school
age
is seven or eight. I completely disagree with the former Use synonyms
since
children aged Suggestion
for
four
are still too young. Use synonyms
However
, I agree with the latter and I believe that seven or eight is a Linking Words
better
Suggestion
good
age
for children to go to school.
Use synonyms
Four
years old children are too young and it sending them to schools would be a challenge. Use synonyms
Firstly
, they do not have the required skills to be in schools Linking Words
since
a lot of children at Suggestion
for
this
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Use synonyms
age lack
focus and find it difficult to communicate with others effectively. Accept comma addition
age, lack
For instance
, they might find it quite daunting to comprehend complicated subjects Linking Words
such
as mathematics or science. Linking Words
Secondly
, young children need time to play and discover the world Linking Words
instead
of being locked up in schools to study. They might not tolerate academic pressure since they cannot handle stress at Linking Words
this
point in their lives.
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On the other hand
, older children are capable of going to Linking Words
schools
and even excel at studying. At Suggestion
school
this
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age
, their brains are ready to understand school subjects and communicate their ideas efficiently with their teachers and peers. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, since they have spent their early childhood years without stress and worries, they are eager to start their formal education and are more likely to do well academically than their counterparts who started their Linking Words
aducation
at the activities of educating or instructing; activities that impart knowledge or skill
education
educations
four
.
To conclude, children aged Use synonyms
four
are still too young to go to school and it would be unfair to ruin their childhood by forcing them to study hard while they should be enjoying their lives. Use synonyms
However
, seven or eight years old children have developed the required skills to excel academically and are ready to start their education.Linking Words
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