You were absent from an important event held by the company you work for. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Apologize for your absence and explain the reasoning. Explain why you had to be at the other event. Explain what you will do to catch up.
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter to apologize for not attending an event
held at our company. I had to attend the family event
, as it was crucial to me.
Let me explain in detail. Actually, there was a family function in our house which I had to attend and it needed my attention. All our relatives were invited to the event
and without me, my family could not commence the event
as I had to play an important role and it could not be ignored. It was a special pooja which takes place every year at my place and we have been doing this
for many years, So I had to be there.
I will do needfull
to catch up with the events I missed as soon as I join back. I will cover up all the project work once I'm there and will try to meet the company's motto and requirements. I will not make you upset by doing any work given to me.
I hope you will take Correct your spelling
needful
this
into consideration. Thank you.
Yours Faithfully,
Mohit TambheSubmitted by jatinderpanaich328 on
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Coherence and Cohesion
Try to vary your sentence structures to make your writing more engaging.
Task Achievement
You can enhance your task achievement by briefly mentioning any specific steps you'll take to catch up.
Task Achievement
You have clearly stated the reason for your absence and provided an appropriate level of detail.
Coherence and Cohesion
Your letter follows a logical structure, with each paragraph focusing on a different aspect of the topic.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite