It is said that "Not everything that is learned is contained in books". Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?

It is often said that books
does not contain
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do not contain
whole
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the whole
of the learning that one learns in his lifetime. In my opinion, both sources are important to gain
knowledge
which usually depends on the
age
of the
person
.  Books plays the most important role of attaining the
knowledge
in the initial stages of life. The child’s brain is usually sculpted to retain information from the graphics and the print material. Young children gather
knowledge
from the books and
then
in their
adulthood they
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adulthood, they
apply, experiment and
then
learn from the experience.
For instance
, my four year old has a habit of reading alphabet books, and to my
surprise he
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surprise, he
learnt writing of the alphabets himself which we
were trying
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tried
have tried
to teach him since
long time
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a long time
.  Experience
also play
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also plays
has also played
a role to uplift one’s
knowledge
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knowledge, however
however
the
person
must be of that
age
in which implementation can be done. Adolescents or adults usually apply their
knowledge
to their chores and if that fails fulfil the
purpose
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purpose, then
then
, they get the teaching of life not to repeat the same.
For example
, a 12 year old boy in my vicinity was learning how to
paddle cycle
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paddle, cycle
, each time he paddles the chain of the
cycle
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cyclical
cyclic
release. After much inspection, he got to know that he was not
locking
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locked
it properly. In conclusion, a
person
learns from experience by implementing from what they have learnt in young
age
by reading books.
Hence
, I believe that depending on the
age
of the
person
, one can get
knowledge
from books or from their experience in their life.

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