Educaiton for young poeple is important in many countries.However, some people think that the government should spend more money on education in adult populations who cannot read and write. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Overall the report has a clear
visualization
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and in most of the cases communicates the information that it intends to. Even at the start it has uses a map
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to provide details on the list of participants by region with the numbers. The categorization of companies is clearly described with a scatter plot using the size of the ball depicting the numbers under each category. In most cases when comparing the
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of Torchbearers
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Aspirationals the reports uses the bullet charts as
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to communicate the
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by each category and
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to to rank the
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against each other. The bullet
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communicates the
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and provides a visual
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between the two categories. In places where they have used
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charts.
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, under “Abundance amid scarcity” it looks as though it is a stacked
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chart
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and the audience tend to look for a numerical value on the x and y axis. In
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case it is the same
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of Torchbearers
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progress
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. The user has to read the content to understand/interpret the
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chart
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. Which violates the concept of
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(Where the picture has to describe the data). In my opinion, I think a pie
cart
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chart
would have been a better alternative to show the percentage out of the whole or to be consistent we could have used the bullet
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the circular
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graph
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does not clearly visualize the
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. Though we could see the difference amount, the magnitude or the amount of difference is not seen clearly.
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a regular
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graph with percentage as the numerical value would have been easier for visualizing the difference. To be more effective I think the choice of
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color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
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should be different. For someone who is
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color
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colour
blind the distinction between categories will not be clear. So choosing a
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color
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colour
from the opposite spectrum
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color
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range would have been a good choice.

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    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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