You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date. Task: Write a letter to your new boss, explaining your situation, expressing your concern and suggesting solution.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to inform you that I will not

able

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start

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job

on November 15.

However

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In my

interview

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I said

this

time was perfect

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me. The reason that I cannot start my

job

is my mother. Unfortunately, my mother had a bad accident

last

night, and she is in

hospital

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the hospital

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right now. I

am very

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am very worried

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worry

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about her and prefer I go to

hospital

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and

tack

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care of her.

Beside

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I have to take care of my little brother and do housewife duty during

time

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that my mother will stay in hospital. I will very

appreciate

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you if you understand my situation and let me

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start my

job

on December 15.

Also

during

this

time

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I can do my

job

at home through the Internet. I can e-mail my report Once again, I am sorry for inconvenience you and thank you for your understanding. Yours faithfully, Mari

Mon Feb 24 2020

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

154 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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