You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date. Task: Write a letter to your new boss, explaining your situation, expressing your concern and suggesting solution.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to inform you that I will not
able
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start
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my
job
on November 15.
However
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In my
interview
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I said
this
time was perfect
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me. The reason that I cannot start my
job
is my mother. Unfortunately, my mother had a bad accident
last
night, and she is in
hospital
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right now. I
am very
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worry
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sorry
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about her and prefer I go to
hospital
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and
tack
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take
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care of her.
Beside
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I have to take care of my little brother and do housewife duty during
time
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that my mother will stay in hospital. I will very
appreciate
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you if you understand my situation and let me
to
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start my
job
on December 15.
Also
during
this
time
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I can do my
job
at home through the Internet. I can e-mail my report Once again, I am sorry for inconvenience you and thank you for your understanding. Yours faithfully, Mari

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