You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date. Task: Write a letter to your new boss, explaining your situation, expressing your concern and suggesting solution.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to inform you that I will not

able

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start

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job

on November 15.

However

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In my

interview

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I said

this

time was perfect

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me. The reason that I cannot start my

job

is my mother. Unfortunately, my mother had a bad accident

last

night, and she is in

hospital

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the hospital

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right now. I

am very

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am very worried

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worry

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about her and prefer I go to

hospital

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and

tack

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care of her.

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I have to take care of my little brother and do housewife duty during

time

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that my mother will stay in hospital. I will very

appreciate

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you if you understand my situation and let me

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start my

job

on December 15.

Also

during

this

time

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I can do my

job

at home through the Internet. I can e-mail my report Once again, I am sorry for inconvenience you and thank you for your understanding. Yours faithfully, Mari

Mon Feb 24 2020

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You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date. Task: Write a letter to your new boss, explaining your situation, expressing your concern and suggesting solution.

Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think person happiness is directly related to economic success, while others believe this depends on other factors. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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Some believe that the development of technology and improved software allow us to translate between languages automatically. Therefore, it is not necessary to learn foreign language anymore. Do u agree or disagree?

Families who do not send their children to government-financed schools should not be required to pay taxes that support universal education. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.