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Do you think Corruption has become world wide issue ? What steps we can take to control corruption ?

#corruption #world #steps #control
The problem of
corruption
is becoming
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has become
 a never ending topic to be discussed.
exploitation
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Exploitation
 has made many
noxiouness
 to the country. Various cases of
corruption
 that occur have triggered country to overcome them.
This
 essay will discuss the solutions to reduce the level of
corruption
 Eradicating the
corruption
 is not just a matter capturing the corrupter, but
also
 on the prevention efforts that must be done. Though education, the government should include the anti-
corruption
 programs to the curriculum and become a part of the subject at the school, starting from elementary school to post-secondary school. These programs
also
 can be integrated with religion subject to give more understanding from religion’s perspective. Utilizing the technology is another solution to eradicate bribery cases, using technology can help the government more transparent by reporting the expenditure through a reporting platform on the web that can be accessed by the public through
internet
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the internet
. Government openness encourages the government to be honest.
bribery
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Bribery
 commonly occurs in
developing country
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developing countries
a developing country
. Many countries are still struggling to eradicate or at least decrease these problems. Even it is
hard but
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hard, but
 does mean impossible. Through education and technology are several effective ways to solve
this
 problem.

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