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A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for hekp in finding a job in your country. you have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. write a letter to this friend. in your letter. tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her explain how to apply for the job begin your letter as follows: Dear....,

#friend #hekp #job #country #company #sort #work
Dear John, Hope you are doing great and that everything goes well with you. It has been
long
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 time since
last
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the last
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 time we met and I am really aiming to see you soon.
Few
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 days ago I was checking my Linkedin profile and I was viewing the new updates when I found a job vacancy that perfectly matches you as it has all
what
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 you love and have already. It is
IT
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an IT
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position
 in a local IT company that has a promising profile. And they are looking for
programming
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a programming
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 projects section head. I can see that you have all
this
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 job
requirement
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 and I would encourage you to apply for
it
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them
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 without any hesitation. They are seeking someone who is
a
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 SAP super user and has previous experience in project management. Of course, any certificate will be an addition and you are already
a
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apply
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Six Sigma certified.
Hence
, you are the one they need for
this
position
.
Moreover
, it is a growing company in its field in our region. So, it will support your resume and improve your experience.
Certainly
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 you can know more and even send for any
further
 clarification that you need if you checked their post on Linkedin or through visiting their website. And you can get more details about that company’s
position
, salaries and business environment through checking their account at
Glass door
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Glassdoor
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. I will send you the link for their post in Linkedin , noting that you need to apply through their own website after creating an account there. Wishing you
best
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the best
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 of luck in your search and aiming to see you soon when you got accepted
in
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this
position
. Best Regards, yours sincerely, Marina Beshay
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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