The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuck county at different times of the year.

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illustrate

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the 8 noted

birds

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bird

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species in woodchuck county in two sessions:

winter

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and

summer

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Over all

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, most birds

appered

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appeared

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the summer

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summer time

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summertime

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, a less amount showed up in

winter

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while

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three of the birds

typs

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types

observed in both

winter

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and

summer

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. Clearly,

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summer time

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summertime

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scored the most viewed bird species. Bluebirds, Mockingbirds, Orioles and

woodeckers

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woodpeckers

all showed up in

this

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session. Meanwhile,

winter

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time observed relatively only one type called Juncos.

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, Woodpeckers, Crows and Cardinals have been seen

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both times of the year.

Mon Feb 24 2020

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words winter, summer with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

89 words

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The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuck county at different times of the year.

It is difficult for many people to create a balance between their professional and their personal life. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?

In some countries, younger people are neglecting their right to vote. What problems does this cause and what are some of the possible solutions?

Families who send their children to private school should not be required to pay taxes that support the state educational system Do you agree or disagree?

In the past, knowledge was contained in books. Nowadays, knowledge is uploaded to the internet. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people think advertisements may have positive economic effects whereas others think there are negative social effects because individuals are not satisfied with who they are and what they have. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.