The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuck county at different times of the year.

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The chart above

illustrate

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the 8 noted

birds

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bird

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species in woodchuck county in two sessions:

winter

and

summer

Over all

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, most birds

appered

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appeared

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the summer

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summer time

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, a less amount showed up in

winter

while

three of the birds

typs

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types

observed in both

winter

and

summer

. Clearly,

summer time

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scored the most viewed bird species. Bluebirds, Mockingbirds, Orioles and

woodeckers

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woodpeckers

all showed up in

this

session. Meanwhile,

winter

time observed relatively only one type called Juncos.

however

, Woodpeckers, Crows and Cardinals have been seen

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both times of the year.

Mon Feb 24 2020

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