Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crimes. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, we found that there
are
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is
a lot of crimes happening. People are divided in their opinion regarding punishment, on
other hand
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the other hand
, they wanted a fixed punishment and the rest believe we
haave
have or possess, either in a concrete or an abstract sense
have
to decide carefully by keeping mind some consideration,
such
as motivation for committing it, and circumstances of an individual crime. I will support these views with arguments in the following paragraph. Let us take a look at the
first
case. The world has witnessed varieties of
wickedness wheter
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wickedness, whether
wickedness whether
wickedness water
wickedness weather
it was an extraordinary
crimes
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crime
or not.
For example
, drug dealer, one of massive evil at
this
moment. Drugs are universal enemy due to its abuse, which leads many countries at the emergency status, and the
distributors re
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distributors, re
the most responsible person for
this
damage, till they have to get a
most severe
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more severe
punishment, no more compromise, even the death penalty is
equals
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equal
to them. Shortly, a big badness should receive a serious conviction. On
other hand
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the other hand
, as it
known
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is known
as ordinary crime, in
instance
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an instance
, a case
occured
come to pass
occurred
in Indonesia a few years ago, a grandmother was stealing some cassavas
wherefor
where in the world
wherever
therefore
she
was feel
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was feeling
felt
hungry. And
then
, the court called her into a judge due to her action has reported. She told
to
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of
the His Majesty the reason why she makes it, and
finally
based to her confession, His Majesty resolve the case by
let
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letting
her free. So, in several
condition
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conditions
we have to take some deliberation,
moreover in
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moreover, in
all the things
tht
pointing out something
that
categorized as a regular
offense
a lack of politeness; a failure to show regard for others; wounding the feelings or others
offence
office
fence
. To put it simply, we have to understand that our government has arranged the best way to reduce criminalization by using many ways. One of them
is determine
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is determining
is to determine
infliction
accordingly
.
Finally
, no matter what the chastisement is it, as long as it is a fair determination.
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