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Scientists agree that people are damaging their health by eating too much junk food.Some people think that the answer to this problem is to educate people.Others think education will not work.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, the habit of eating excessive amount of fast
food
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 is becoming an unhealthy eating tendency, posing jeopardy to the human health. While some people regard
education
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 as an effective measure to rectify
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 situation, some others have little faith in teaching
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From my perspective, I contend that
education
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 is a feasible solution On the one hand, raising the awareness of people towards the dangers of unhealthy
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 can certainly yield some promising outcomes.
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, many fast
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 products
provide
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provides
 very little or no information on the nutritional content in them, deterring the consumers from knowing the amount of fat, sodium or cholesterol which they take in. By being informed of how
much
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many
 of these harmful substances
is contained
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are contained
 in their favourite hamburgers or chips, as well as being shown the likely consequences of over-eating these foods, consumers can be more cautious the
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 time they choose their
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.
Secondly
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,
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at
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in
 schools can help to form healthy eating habits for children and parents.
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, schools can hold some extracurricular activities
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 as growing and selling vegetables with the attendance of both students and parents, in order to promote the benefits of healthy diets and warn against the potential risks of junk
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.
On the other hand
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, some people doubt the effectiveness of
education
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 for certain reasons.
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 with, despite being aware of the negative effects of fast
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, many people who are too busy persist to eat it due to its being convenient and time-saving. In
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 case,
education
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 hardly makes a difference as they have made a choice.
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, compared with the wide range and availability of fast
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 stores and menus, healthy
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 is seriously limited.
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, healthy
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 is commonly inferior to fast
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 in terms of taste and prices as a matter of fact.
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,
however
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 convincing
education
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 is, it is almost impossible for people to change their eating habit without a ready alternative to their unhealthy
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 choices. In conclusion, people have different opinions about whether to support
education
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 so as to reduce people’s consumption of fast
food
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. In my opinion,
education
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 can be a viable measure with careful consideration of other impediments.

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